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glowing errily in the pitch black night
Talon-shaped claws coated red
gleam in the sliver of light

In the eyes, a fire dances
nothing but uncontrollable flames
A feral growl come from deep within
an inhuman sound reaching ears

A tainted smell fills the air
the smell of death and blood making stomachs lurch
The light fades away
claws disappear leaving behind flames

A fire's flames which engulfs blood, all within his eyes
that slowly dies away
The cry of one tortured and broken fills the empty air and every beings soul
haunting them with his pain

With one last cry, blood falls to the ground
followed by the body
Ending the pain

For one last time
the eyes glow red
But the fire
is dead
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Bloody Flames

Contributed by lil_pup91 on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 07:05:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The color of blood
glowing errily in the pitch black night
Talon-shaped claws coated red
gleam in the sliver of light

In the eyes, a fire dances
nothing but uncontrollable flames
A feral growl come from deep within
an inhuman sound reaching ears

A tainted smell fills the air
the smell of death and blood making stomachs lurch
The light fades away
claws disappear leaving behind flames

A fire's flames which engulfs blood, all within his eyes
that slowly dies away
The cry of one tortured and broken fills the empty air and every beings soul
haunting them with his pain

With one last cry, blood falls to the ground
followed by the body
Ending the pain

For one last time
the eyes glow red
But the fire
is dead

Copyright © lil_pup91 ... [ 2006-05-27 19:05:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bloody Flames (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 08:50:28 PM AEST
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Well, very dark poem indeed. But very well put together, nice work. Keep it up.

-Eddie Dean

Re: Bloody Flames (User Rating: 1 )
by Amazon on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 09:45:19 PM AEST
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awsome imagery i loved it

Re: Bloody Flames (User Rating: 1 )
by AshRayne on Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 10:18:15 PM AEST
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the ending is powerful, a good ending to a good poem.

~Ash

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