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Array ( [sid] => 120932 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Have the Solution to All Problems [time] => 2006-05-28 22:48:22 [hometext] => Happy Trails!! :) [bodytext] => What's the point in being alive
if you already feel you've died?
Why drag this out; it's draining of fluid,
Sweat, tears, and blood, the whole time you knew it.
If you care for me just kill yourself too,
The world's suicide chain will never be through.
Then everyone will die but the cold and the heartless,
And they will not suffer nor dwell in this love mess.
The world will return to survival of the fittest,
The ruler is simply the one who can hurt best.
There will be peace, there will be order,
If nobody cares, there is nothing to fight for.

When I kill myself it's a selfless act,
Benefits to all, and to all a binding pact.
We'll promise to die and not to come back,
Everyone is happy if their veins they do hack.
Our blood will feed the hungry and nourish the sick,
No one will mind not even a prick.
I ran to the window and saw Old Saint Nick,
He twinkled and smiled, approving my pick.
We crawled into bed and died close together,
Our skeletons hugging 'til beaten by weather. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 36 [informant] => assassinatorgirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

I Have the Solution to All Problems

Contributed by assassinatorgirl on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 10:48:22 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

What's the point in being alive
if you already feel you've died?
Why drag this out; it's draining of fluid,
Sweat, tears, and blood, the whole time you knew it.
If you care for me just kill yourself too,
The world's suicide chain will never be through.
Then everyone will die but the cold and the heartless,
And they will not suffer nor dwell in this love mess.
The world will return to survival of the fittest,
The ruler is simply the one who can hurt best.
There will be peace, there will be order,
If nobody cares, there is nothing to fight for.

When I kill myself it's a selfless act,
Benefits to all, and to all a binding pact.
We'll promise to die and not to come back,
Everyone is happy if their veins they do hack.
Our blood will feed the hungry and nourish the sick,
No one will mind not even a prick.
I ran to the window and saw Old Saint Nick,
He twinkled and smiled, approving my pick.
We crawled into bed and died close together,
Our skeletons hugging 'til beaten by weather.

Copyright © assassinatorgirl ... [ 2006-05-28 22:48:22]
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Re: I Have the Solution to All Problems (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 12:10:29 AM AEST
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interesting...but i like it.

that's....quite a solution. it almost leaves you thinking....

- Bethani -

Re: I Have the Solution to All Problems (User Rating: 1 )
by spider on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 08:13:42 AM AEST
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really great poem :)

Re: I Have the Solution to All Problems (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 10:09:21 AM AEST
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it was written well, and it makes sense, except that...well you looked at the big picture, but technically...i mean some commit suicide because of others (blame the people who made you miserable etc), but if they do, they show that they care of what others think, and commiting suicide just shows a weakness that later others will detest in you. so...not sure how that solves anything, to be dissaproved of even after death. but that's just my opinion.

~natalya

Re: I Have the Solution to All Problems (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 08:20:23 PM AEST
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hmmm....suicide seems like a cowardly act...its much more challenging and rewarding to live life to its fullest.

wiz

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