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Array ( [sid] => 121027 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear God [time] => 2006-05-30 19:06:06 [hometext] => I wrote this when i was heartbroken about a person i loved who toyed with my heart. [bodytext] => Dear God I met a boy today
He makes me feel in such a way
I get butterflies whenever he touches me
Please God never let him leave
He makes me feel warm inside
Makes me feel like I never have to hide
I know I can tell him anything

Dear God I fell in love today
So now each days
I walk the halls with a smile
He makes me feel as if im worthwhile
Each time I look,I get lost in his eyes
No ones ever made me feel this important
I know he was heavensent
Hes my angel

Dear God he kissed me today
I feel beautiful when hes around
I know he will catch me when I fall
So excited I am when he texts or calls
Never been so happy in my life
I hope it never ends
When he holds me in his arms
I know ill never come to any harm

Dear God he told me he loved me today
I told him i feel the same way
Too much is never enough of him
Hes the one that took away my pain
All my secrets hidden in vain
Took away all my feelings of refrain
Hes the best thing that ever happened to me
And most my friends would have to agree

Dear God my heart broke today
All the passions gone away
I know ill never be ok...
Why did it have to be this way?
So now each day
I walk the halls in dissaray
With a distant look in my eyes
I hate how often I cry
I wish i could drink myself to death
Then never again will I have to take another painfilled breath

Dear God I can see my life wither away
Ive fallen astray
From sweet sweet sanity
Why didn't I see
I should have known it could never be
I can't even sing anymore
The pains too much,its something I cant ignore

Dear God I killed myself today
With help from my dear friend razorblade
I watched as my veins cried their own crimson tears of pain
The pain was simply too much to bear
Tired of wondering wether or not he cared

Dear God
His love really was the death of me
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Dear God

Contributed by liindso14 on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 07:06:06 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Dear God I met a boy today
He makes me feel in such a way
I get butterflies whenever he touches me
Please God never let him leave
He makes me feel warm inside
Makes me feel like I never have to hide
I know I can tell him anything

Dear God I fell in love today
So now each days
I walk the halls with a smile
He makes me feel as if im worthwhile
Each time I look,I get lost in his eyes
No ones ever made me feel this important
I know he was heavensent
Hes my angel

Dear God he kissed me today
I feel beautiful when hes around
I know he will catch me when I fall
So excited I am when he texts or calls
Never been so happy in my life
I hope it never ends
When he holds me in his arms
I know ill never come to any harm

Dear God he told me he loved me today
I told him i feel the same way
Too much is never enough of him
Hes the one that took away my pain
All my secrets hidden in vain
Took away all my feelings of refrain
Hes the best thing that ever happened to me
And most my friends would have to agree

Dear God my heart broke today
All the passions gone away
I know ill never be ok...
Why did it have to be this way?
So now each day
I walk the halls in dissaray
With a distant look in my eyes
I hate how often I cry
I wish i could drink myself to death
Then never again will I have to take another painfilled breath

Dear God I can see my life wither away
Ive fallen astray
From sweet sweet sanity
Why didn't I see
I should have known it could never be
I can't even sing anymore
The pains too much,its something I cant ignore

Dear God I killed myself today
With help from my dear friend razorblade
I watched as my veins cried their own crimson tears of pain
The pain was simply too much to bear
Tired of wondering wether or not he cared

Dear God
His love really was the death of me




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Re: Dear God (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 08:19:07 PM AEST
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wow...i thought that was awesome!

great write!

wiz


Re: Dear God (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 08:45:46 PM AEST
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at places I cried..really good wwrite.




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