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Array ( [sid] => 121106 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All you have done [time] => 2006-06-01 09:27:38 [hometext] => This kinda tells the story of whats going on in my life...sure ya can figure out how it ends [bodytext] => I just dont understand
You gave me your hand
It was all Ive ever known
With your help I have grown
You taught me how to deal
You helped my wounds heal
You helped me survive
Youre the reason Im alive
But now you turned the tables
Stated rumors and gave out labels
Made every one take your side
Making them think Im the one that lied
You only saved me to watch me fall
Now Im too far for any to hear when I call
I guess I was right to be so afraid
I always knew id be betrayed
I should have listened to my heart
But I gave it to you and you tore it apart
You planned it the whole way
Rip me down and have your day
Well you win I hope your satisfied
I know you will never be justified
This hurts all the more
The pain to strong I cant ignore
You were the one that helped me confide
You were the one that helped my suicide
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 264 [topic] => 36 [informant] => nothingness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
All you have done

Contributed by nothingness on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 09:27:38 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I just dont understand
You gave me your hand
It was all Ive ever known
With your help I have grown
You taught me how to deal
You helped my wounds heal
You helped me survive
Youre the reason Im alive
But now you turned the tables
Stated rumors and gave out labels
Made every one take your side
Making them think Im the one that lied
You only saved me to watch me fall
Now Im too far for any to hear when I call
I guess I was right to be so afraid
I always knew id be betrayed
I should have listened to my heart
But I gave it to you and you tore it apart
You planned it the whole way
Rip me down and have your day
Well you win I hope your satisfied
I know you will never be justified
This hurts all the more
The pain to strong I cant ignore
You were the one that helped me confide
You were the one that helped my suicide




Copyright © nothingness ... [ 2006-06-01 09:27:38]
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Re: All you have done (User Rating: 1 )
by EddieDean on Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 08:07:29 PM AEST
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Someone once told me that suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem. Its true. Life sucks man, it does, but we gotta pick ourselves up and keep on keepin on. I can't begin to tell you how many times I've had to pick myself up, beaten and bloody, and continue on in life. Its hard, but it can be done.

-Eddie Dean


Re: All you have done (User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 10:05:16 PM AEST
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I love this poem and I know what your going through... but I say that if someone puts you in hell show them what hell is really like.

Eternally Punished,
Faust




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