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[aid] => Mick
[title] => In The Loving Memory
[time] => 2003-02-07 12:30:00
[hometext] => ...day in day out in my life through you
[bodytext] => Dear Mom and Dad,
I just feel so sad
All those years we lived, I have been so bad
When my problems wear me, only you I had
Is it too late now? can't I just say sorry?
And in your dearest arms lay down my worries
My life under your sentry was one happy story
And now I bear in my mind those sweet memories
I never got to pay you back all your affection
All I ever got were the worst decisions
On my knees I lay fighting this apprehension
Trying to find the right words to ease the tension
In your loving memory, I came to put across
My deepest regrets of your tragic loss
In your loving memory, I still feel ashamed
That when I saw my failure, it is you I blamed
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 306
[topic] => 39
[informant] => Opium
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[acomm] => 0
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 27
[ratings] => 7
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Grief
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In The Loving Memory
Contributed by
Opium
on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Dear Mom and Dad,
I just feel so sad
All those years we lived, I have been so bad
When my problems wear me, only you I had
Is it too late now? can't I just say sorry?
And in your dearest arms lay down my worries
My life under your sentry was one happy story
And now I bear in my mind those sweet memories
I never got to pay you back all your affection
All I ever got were the worst decisions
On my knees I lay fighting this apprehension
Trying to find the right words to ease the tension
In your loving memory, I came to put across
My deepest regrets of your tragic loss
In your loving memory, I still feel ashamed
That when I saw my failure, it is you I blamed
Copyright ©
Opium
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2003-02-07 12:30:00]
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Re: In The Loving Memory
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by cryingonmyporch on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 12:48:49 PM AEST
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Wow this one I liked a bunch. It is true how sometimes we don't appreciate some people until its to late and then when they are here all we see is how they failed us. I like it.
Always
Amy |
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Re: In The Loving Memory
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by TheSpiritx on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 12:51:34 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. I know a lot of people wish they would have had better relations post factum. Good job. |
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Re: In The Loving Memory
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 01:31:45 PM AEST
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AAAWWW this one hit me hard,I still have my father here but my mom had past,we didnt get along when I was a teen, but when I got older we were best friends,now shes gone I have no regrets because I told her I loved her!
With my father,hes living with me & I'm taking care of him! Your parents know how you feel now & no its never too late,they can hear your prayers!Good write! Touching! Christina |
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Re: In The Loving Memory
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 02:48:19 PM AEST
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| As a parent of grown children....I can tell you that parents realize how hard it is to grow up, and they know that each person has to find his or her own way in life. In my heart..I know your parents knew you loved them and they are proud of what you have become. . great write as always my friend. Larry |
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Re: In The Loving Memory
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by KiEme on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 04:40:48 PM AEST
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Emotionally fabulous.
~Amy Marie
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Re: In The Loving Memory
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 05:42:58 PM AEST
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| awww im so sorry for your loss, a beautiful letter to your parents, im sure they know, huggs always nessa |
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Re: In The Loving Memory
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 07:01:22 PM AEST
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| well written piece, sorry about your mom and dad, appreciate those that are in your life now, life is so very short, hug and love all, thanks for sharing this one |
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Re: In The Loving Memory
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by gina on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 12:18:40 PM AEST
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hello mam , no u dont know me , i just wanna say wat ur son couldnt tell u :"kellou menkon " hehe
well if u think ur parents donno how thanksfull u r , y not telling them right now!yalla rou7 2llon , 7a entor hon to see thier reply ,i bet it will be " rou7 men hon ,we're not fadyilak :P" of course not
GINA |
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Re: In The Loving Memory
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by LadyDama on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 06:33:21 AM AEST
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| this strikes a chord in me too... another excellent poem... i shall enjoyed reading the rest... |
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