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[aid] => mick
[title] => five bales
[time] => 2006-06-01 19:56:47
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[bodytext] => this one's about a film there were five hay bales, in a movie I once saw one hay bale was on fire was it a horror movie? no was it a romance? no was it a comedy? no it was none of these it was a burning hay extravaganza a thriller, even the bale burned like hell fire I was on the edge of my seat would the other bales have the same fate? the first bale was black and charred but still burning how exciting! the wind blew a gust of cinders over the second bale "where was the farmer?" I screamed as the second bale began to smoke and catch I couldn't watch, couldn't take much more only five minutes from the credits and four bales from none now there were three bales and two smoking piles what a movie! I started to cry as the third bale combusted in a flash faster than a tornado who can save the bales? oh who? the next bale resisted for a while beside it's neighbours and then they sputtered out! oh relief! but what was this? a small piece glass shining in the sun caused the bale to ignite and disappear in flames faster than a man could believe the last bale was slightly damp by now, I was exhausted with emotion then the cinema screen began to smoulder "what amazing effects" I thought and the smell of burning plastic how realistic! I could not understand my fellow cinema goers stampeding to the exits "it's only a film!" I cried "the bale isn't really burning!" but it was the final bale was blazing and I looked down at my shoes and they too were on fire what an incredible film! I could really feel the heat [comments] => 1 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 43 [informant] => vitamin_joe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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