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Array ( [sid] => 121185 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The destruction of my hope... [time] => 2006-06-02 21:08:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What this does to me
This push pull motion
Tearing at my will
My want to carry on
This desire to continue
Fades like setting suns
And as the light disappears
So does the feeling of happiness
The sorrowful burden overwhelms
My ability to cope
The loss becomes too much
It drives me to my knees
I cry out in the night
Yet I’m all alone
And no one hears my words…
I’m lost and afraid
Traveling down a road
That I foresee leading me to my demise
And yet as I wander aimlessly
I feel a familiar sense of disappointment
That of knowing I failed again…

I think of you as I through the night
I see you still in memories
Laughing...
Smiling...
Caring…
For me…
I remember all we shared
The times we had together
And I fall apart all over…
I realize the loss I’ve created for myself
I know that I cannot make amends
This is what hurts the most…

I push on into the darkness
Not sure where to go
Knowing you will never remember
All these things I know I will never forget…
I trust blindly in my hopes
Knowing I have no other choice
I follow only because
I’m to weak to lead myself…
I see only that which I desire
Glowing through the gloom
Like a beacon in the night
Leading my heart
Towards what it truly longs for…

And as I struggle down this road
That I stubble down in loneliness
I see the faint glimpses of hope
Flashing like stars in a pitch black sky…
I fall upon my back
And give up on this lonely voyage…
I find myself laying in pain
Caught in a down pour of falling misery
That masks my own streaking sorrow
Empty and hollow
Feeling as if my soul has been ripped from me…
Cast aside to die
And rot away like our past memories
And all our days of joy… [comments] => 5 [counter] => 313 [topic] => 22 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
The destruction of my hope...

Contributed by holderofthestone on Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 09:08:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



What this does to me
This push pull motion
Tearing at my will
My want to carry on
This desire to continue
Fades like setting suns
And as the light disappears
So does the feeling of happiness
The sorrowful burden overwhelms
My ability to cope
The loss becomes too much
It drives me to my knees
I cry out in the night
Yet I’m all alone
And no one hears my words…
I’m lost and afraid
Traveling down a road
That I foresee leading me to my demise
And yet as I wander aimlessly
I feel a familiar sense of disappointment
That of knowing I failed again…

I think of you as I through the night
I see you still in memories
Laughing...
Smiling...
Caring…
For me…
I remember all we shared
The times we had together
And I fall apart all over…
I realize the loss I’ve created for myself
I know that I cannot make amends
This is what hurts the most…

I push on into the darkness
Not sure where to go
Knowing you will never remember
All these things I know I will never forget…
I trust blindly in my hopes
Knowing I have no other choice
I follow only because
I’m to weak to lead myself…
I see only that which I desire
Glowing through the gloom
Like a beacon in the night
Leading my heart
Towards what it truly longs for…

And as I struggle down this road
That I stubble down in loneliness
I see the faint glimpses of hope
Flashing like stars in a pitch black sky…
I fall upon my back
And give up on this lonely voyage…
I find myself laying in pain
Caught in a down pour of falling misery
That masks my own streaking sorrow
Empty and hollow
Feeling as if my soul has been ripped from me…
Cast aside to die
And rot away like our past memories
And all our days of joy…




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Re: The destruction of my hope... (User Rating: 1 )
by MarLites on Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 09:57:04 AM AEST
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Great Great Great However you are not alone.
I feel the same way. And it sucks


Re: The destruction of my hope... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 11:08:37 AM AEST
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your not alone.....


Re: The destruction of my hope... (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 12:30:47 PM AEST
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you are not alone. but not due to someone else. I WILL ALWAYS BE THERE FOR YOU.


Re: The destruction of my hope... (User Rating: 1 )
by wikedladi on Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 01:11:04 PM AEST
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Nice write! i love the images you painted with your words. You can push threw! sometimes hope is all we have, so trust that it won't fail you and things will get better.


Re: The destruction of my hope... (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 09:26:37 PM AEST
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GOOD WRITE




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