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Array ( [sid] => 121303 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Although You're There [time] => 2006-06-05 08:21:21 [hometext] => I feel so alone.. [bodytext] => Darling although you are there,
I can’t help it, into oblivion I stare,
As you lay holding me tight,
I gaze at the moon so big and bright.

Wishing upon the glistening stars,
To take me away from here so far,
Away from the hurt and pain I feel,
If only for a peaceful moment I can steal.

A moment of peace is such paradise,
A moment I can rest in and feel nice,
I feel alone even though you’re near,
I still feel dead after you have dried my tear.

I am haunted by things I can not say,
Why my darling can’t you make then go away?
You swore to protect and to love,
I fear my hand is slipping from your glove.

You promise my heart you would never leave,
That you’ll never hurt nor deceive,
But there’s doubt in the back of my mind,
That one day you’ll be cruel and unkind.

That you’ll leave me beaten on the floor,
That you’ll close the last open door,
That you’ll say goodbye and leave me dying,
That you’ll never look back on the soul you left crying.

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Although You're There

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 08:21:21 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Darling although you are there,
I can’t help it, into oblivion I stare,
As you lay holding me tight,
I gaze at the moon so big and bright.

Wishing upon the glistening stars,
To take me away from here so far,
Away from the hurt and pain I feel,
If only for a peaceful moment I can steal.

A moment of peace is such paradise,
A moment I can rest in and feel nice,
I feel alone even though you’re near,
I still feel dead after you have dried my tear.

I am haunted by things I can not say,
Why my darling can’t you make then go away?
You swore to protect and to love,
I fear my hand is slipping from your glove.

You promise my heart you would never leave,
That you’ll never hurt nor deceive,
But there’s doubt in the back of my mind,
That one day you’ll be cruel and unkind.

That you’ll leave me beaten on the floor,
That you’ll close the last open door,
That you’ll say goodbye and leave me dying,
That you’ll never look back on the soul you left crying.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2006-06-05 08:21:21]
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Re: Although You're There (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 09:40:27 AM AEST
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this line: I fear my hand is slipping from your glove. It's really visual and I see a hand coming out of a glove..hauntingly sad pixilator..good work here.

Re: Although You're There (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 11:29:52 AM AEST
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awww thats so sad dear.... --That you’ll leave me beaten on the floor,
That you’ll close the last open door,
That you’ll say goodbye and leave me dying,
That you’ll never look back on the soul you left crying.-- what a strong ending! great great write A++++

Re: Although You're There (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 02:56:31 PM AEST
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I don't know what they call a female master at something and i ain't about 2 call u mistress lol or mister, seriously, i'll call call somthing more appropriately, i've been reading and enjoying your poetry since i got here since i don't know when, you are the poetry itself, the enbodiment of all the heart has to offer the epetime of poetic perfection
your poetry is inocence and beauty in a realm that could only be describe as another
place and time. such hurt mixed with longing and loving and wisdom. i think i'll have seconds, every thing u write covers every that love is and even sometimes, isn't . **********

(((( pix ))))

Ben

Re: Although You're There (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 09:21:02 PM AEST
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wow Pixie girl you never disapoint me in your writes so much emotions and deep.
Miss reading your poetry.

hugs

Re: Although You're There (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 09:46:04 PM AEST
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Pixie ... you have an uncany way of expressing yourself in a relateable way to nearly every one who reads you. What you feel ... you allow them to feel and relate to, always, regardless of the emotion at the moment. No exception here.

Nazzy ~

Re: Although You're There (User Rating: 1 )
by pander on Thursday, 27th December 2007 @ 01:12:08 PM AEST
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Hello Pixie. Long time no see! I thought you'd left this site so can I say how good it is to see you're back again. And as usual with a brilliant piece of writing.

Lots of luv from your greatest fan,

pander
xxxxx

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