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[sid] => 121325
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Relentless
[time] => 2006-06-05 16:16:42
[hometext] => This poem is about a young person adventuring adulthood too early
[bodytext] => I fell in love at a young age not knowing if we both were on the same page I took up adult responsibilities to earn everyones trust unfortunately not knowing it would end up in a bust I was trying to uphold my vows with the utmost respect in doing so I failed and that was hard to accept The desires of my heart no one could understand how it was pulling at me and everything else was going bland Rendering myself relentless is all I could of done living in the shadows of judgements I sometimes felt alone Sometimes I felt I was on display to be provoked at any cause knowingly down the line I would pay I had an uncontrollable thirst for ambition beyond any admisssion I had no time for baby steps an no virtue of patience My willingness to be in front and not pushed to the back only left room for my nature to attacked While trying to build my career and progress with all success only left my loved ones with so much to grasp and to suppress Dont say Im selfish and that I dont care I have an urge to persevere and that I wont spare Relentless to whatever people thought I should do I regulated my own life and came to terms with all truths My personality was targeted for being pushy and too forward if I succumb to negativity anything I do will not be warranted Every action that I gave I received the wrong reaction I stepped out of those situations to regain my self-satisfaction Mistakes were made I regret them all I walked too fast I had to learn to crawl [comments] => 2 [counter] => 272 [topic] => 65 [informant] => BRONZEN [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
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