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The thought of a bullet rushing threw my brain is more pleasant to me
I'd glady stab you if given a choice
If you were normaly this would be easy to see

To hear your name makes my teeth gritt with anger
I hate all that you are and will ever be
I'd rather not know you, i'd rather you be a stranger
I can't get rid of you, i will never be set free

YOU are one person no one needs in their life
Thinking only of yourself, you ruin so many hearts
So ignorante and rude, you bring nothing but stife
SO blind to what you do, the process restarts

Masking your true intensions with lies
Wanting only want is just out of your means
On to a new lover while the last one still cries
You break great lovers, tearing at the seams

One day your greed will catch up with you
You'll feel the heart break you've caused for so others
Leaving you scared and lonely too
You'll be left empty handed with no lovers [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 6 [informant] => wikedladi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Smoldering Whisper

Contributed by wikedladi on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 04:23:28 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



I can't stand the sound of your voice
The thought of a bullet rushing threw my brain is more pleasant to me
I'd glady stab you if given a choice
If you were normaly this would be easy to see

To hear your name makes my teeth gritt with anger
I hate all that you are and will ever be
I'd rather not know you, i'd rather you be a stranger
I can't get rid of you, i will never be set free

YOU are one person no one needs in their life
Thinking only of yourself, you ruin so many hearts
So ignorante and rude, you bring nothing but stife
SO blind to what you do, the process restarts

Masking your true intensions with lies
Wanting only want is just out of your means
On to a new lover while the last one still cries
You break great lovers, tearing at the seams

One day your greed will catch up with you
You'll feel the heart break you've caused for so others
Leaving you scared and lonely too
You'll be left empty handed with no lovers




Copyright © wikedladi ... [ 2006-06-05 16:23:28]
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Re: Smoldering Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 04:40:18 PM AEST
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pretty angry poem, cool style with this one, its a bit choppy but it works with the emotion. good job :)


Re: Smoldering Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 05:19:45 PM AEST
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this remindes me of my feelings towards my old foster carer, Jean. ok we weren't lovers as such, but i still loved her... good write


Re: Smoldering Whisper (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 06:05:23 PM AEST
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Great emotion. I could feel the hate shimmer off of the words. I love it. :D




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