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Array ( [sid] => 121435 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Inside Rape [time] => 2006-06-07 12:33:26 [hometext] => I dedicate this poem to someone very special to me.Thankyou for being there xxx [bodytext] => My hands are tied with bloodied rope
my eyes are not my own
those finger painted rings of hope
were things i should've shown
instead i chose to scar myself
with dead clowns in my mind
and tear out colours from my eyes
to let myself go blind

I'll scratch the door of my own pain
'til no more wood is seen
then wait to hear the rusted chain
wrap round my only dream
of ending all this black inside
and adding other shades
but I can't find the rainbow
and I'm running out of days

I've taken all the clocks apart
to give myself more time
so I can work out where to start
this painting in my mind
I found a brush to add my ink
now all's I need's a knife
to cut the hate i'm feeling
and begin a whole new life



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Inside Rape

Contributed by deadclown on Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 12:33:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



My hands are tied with bloodied rope
my eyes are not my own
those finger painted rings of hope
were things i should've shown
instead i chose to scar myself
with dead clowns in my mind
and tear out colours from my eyes
to let myself go blind

I'll scratch the door of my own pain
'til no more wood is seen
then wait to hear the rusted chain
wrap round my only dream
of ending all this black inside
and adding other shades
but I can't find the rainbow
and I'm running out of days

I've taken all the clocks apart
to give myself more time
so I can work out where to start
this painting in my mind
I found a brush to add my ink
now all's I need's a knife
to cut the hate i'm feeling
and begin a whole new life







Copyright © deadclown ... [ 2006-06-07 12:33:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Inside Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by Remi on Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 02:22:17 PM AEST
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lovely write, it sound like a rebirth, i like it alot


Re: Inside Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by BrokenXbyManyX on Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 04:54:14 PM AEST
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oOo I liked this one, it was creepy kinda but you gotta love it. Nice.

Lauren


Re: Inside Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by bigbadblinkybill on Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 08:44:29 AM AEST
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I really hope you love that special person as much as i love the special person in my life.
we all have problems in life and i am just happy to have her in my life otherwise i do not know where i would be.
its always nice to have someone to hold and to know that someone cares even wen it feels the world is against you
Love u Babe you know who i am XXX
and trust me i ant about to leave


Re: Inside Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 09:27:10 AM AEST
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sends out a message of reincarnation. i like it!

bravo! good write


Re: Inside Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 09:56:57 PM AEST
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very awesome write. i love the rhyming...i myself can't rhyme at all. i love it...you can almost see what's happening. very different, but very well-written.

- Bethani -




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