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Array ( [sid] => 121524 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the rain saw it all [time] => 2006-06-09 09:14:54 [hometext] => this poem is just something i wrote when i was mad at the world i guess [bodytext] => im sick of you
just leave me alone
turn off the lights i wont be coming back home
dont bother to follow me
your tears wont stop me
so what im diffrent
more unique than you
ill meet you in the cemetary
when the rain comes falling down
kissing blood red lips so sweet
if only you knew just how toxic this kiss was
poisioned lips and tainted love
shh dont cry out listen cant you hear it
its the rain and it says
you should die my darling
but dont worry ill join you soon
cold blade to my wrist and one single cut
and the world fades away
and we die here togther my love
and the only witness is the rain [comments] => 2 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

the rain saw it all

Contributed by sen on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 09:14:54 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

im sick of you
just leave me alone
turn off the lights i wont be coming back home
dont bother to follow me
your tears wont stop me
so what im diffrent
more unique than you
ill meet you in the cemetary
when the rain comes falling down
kissing blood red lips so sweet
if only you knew just how toxic this kiss was
poisioned lips and tainted love
shh dont cry out listen cant you hear it
its the rain and it says
you should die my darling
but dont worry ill join you soon
cold blade to my wrist and one single cut
and the world fades away
and we die here togther my love
and the only witness is the rain

Copyright © sen ... [ 2006-06-09 09:14:54]
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Re: the rain saw it all (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_in_waiting on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 09:20:58 AM AEST
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dark times create dark poetry... but you did a great job making me feel the MOOD

cheers
sean

Re: the rain saw it all (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 07:53:25 PM AEST
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WOW....Nice write..
God Bless!

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