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Array ( [sid] => 121658 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mirror [time] => 2006-06-12 14:49:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It stares back at me in silence
I can feel it's eyes piercing my soul
I've heard of it before
but never seen it like this.
The scars form across it's deformed face
and the smell of sulfur feels the room
blood pours from it's head
and a high-pitched scream pounds my ears.
I can see into it's eyes and the fire consumes me
brings me to my knees
and I re-live my pain
I can feel it touch me, it rakes across my skin.
I feel nothing now, as it takes me by the throat
and throws me against the wall.
It looks at me and begins to tell me the horror
the gruesome things of my past
makes me remember it.
"You are a murderer, a sinner, and no one will ever love you!"
It screams at me over and over, and I can't make it stop.
"She doesn't care, she is lying to you like the others!!"
PLEASE STOP!!!!!!!
I can't take this anymore and I close my eyes.
As I open them I look back
and see only myself
staring back at me
thru the glass of the mirror. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 13 [informant] => whiteleo1984 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Mirror

Contributed by whiteleo1984 on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 02:49:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



It stares back at me in silence
I can feel it's eyes piercing my soul
I've heard of it before
but never seen it like this.
The scars form across it's deformed face
and the smell of sulfur feels the room
blood pours from it's head
and a high-pitched scream pounds my ears.
I can see into it's eyes and the fire consumes me
brings me to my knees
and I re-live my pain
I can feel it touch me, it rakes across my skin.
I feel nothing now, as it takes me by the throat
and throws me against the wall.
It looks at me and begins to tell me the horror
the gruesome things of my past
makes me remember it.
"You are a murderer, a sinner, and no one will ever love you!"
It screams at me over and over, and I can't make it stop.
"She doesn't care, she is lying to you like the others!!"
PLEASE STOP!!!!!!!
I can't take this anymore and I close my eyes.
As I open them I look back
and see only myself
staring back at me
thru the glass of the mirror.




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Re: Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by wolf_tamer on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 05:21:48 PM AEST
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interesting. i can relate.
~wolf~


Re: Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 06:22:02 PM AEST
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This give me the shivers,but a great poem..
God Bless!


Re: Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:38:50 PM AEST
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very dark....and u no its a lie....but its a good write


Re: Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Faust on Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 09:53:48 PM AEST
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Well written, It makes me think of The Portrait of Dorian Grey.. You should really read it.

Eternally Punished,
Faust




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