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Array ( [sid] => 121842 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Death of Love [time] => 2006-06-15 23:04:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This is the death of love,
Some might say that love never dies,
Sadly to say that is not true,
Everything dies,

When Love was born,
So innocent and true,
Loyal and self- sacrificing,
Forgiving, all it was,

Love would do anything,
Just to please the one,
Love would give anything
Just to make the one happy,

Love was happy and full of joy,
Hope, peace and longing,
Just for the one,
Love wanted the one Always,

And the one knew,
Knew that sweet Love could be his,
Knew that Love’s mercy could heal,
Wanted Love all for himself,

So he lied and pushed,
Took Love for a ride,
And only thought of his desires,
Taking what he wanted by anyway he could,

Never even thought,
That Love would give all,
Without being pushed,
And without being used,

But no, he used,
Took, and deceived,
And pretended not to ever hear,
Love weeping every night,

Because Love realized to late,
What he really was all about,
And what he did just for himself,
He said so much and wore a mask well,

Love forgave and forgave,
But knew in the end,
Love would brake,
Shatter in a million pieces,

If only Love had not given him a chance,
If only Love could keep pretending,
But it’s too late,
Love must die,

This Love,
Could not live,
Not after what’s been,
Not in what’s to come,

Love dies,
Because of his lies,
Hatred, fear,
And most of all selfishness,

Love is dead,
I killed Love,
Because he broke it,
So may I burn in Hell,

If that’s to be my fate,
But Love had to go,
It was too broken,
And it was too late.

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The Death of Love

Contributed by Alison on Thursday, 15th June 2006 @ 11:04:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

This is the death of love,
Some might say that love never dies,
Sadly to say that is not true,
Everything dies,

When Love was born,
So innocent and true,
Loyal and self- sacrificing,
Forgiving, all it was,

Love would do anything,
Just to please the one,
Love would give anything
Just to make the one happy,

Love was happy and full of joy,
Hope, peace and longing,
Just for the one,
Love wanted the one Always,

And the one knew,
Knew that sweet Love could be his,
Knew that Love’s mercy could heal,
Wanted Love all for himself,

So he lied and pushed,
Took Love for a ride,
And only thought of his desires,
Taking what he wanted by anyway he could,

Never even thought,
That Love would give all,
Without being pushed,
And without being used,

But no, he used,
Took, and deceived,
And pretended not to ever hear,
Love weeping every night,

Because Love realized to late,
What he really was all about,
And what he did just for himself,
He said so much and wore a mask well,

Love forgave and forgave,
But knew in the end,
Love would brake,
Shatter in a million pieces,

If only Love had not given him a chance,
If only Love could keep pretending,
But it’s too late,
Love must die,

This Love,
Could not live,
Not after what’s been,
Not in what’s to come,

Love dies,
Because of his lies,
Hatred, fear,
And most of all selfishness,

Love is dead,
I killed Love,
Because he broke it,
So may I burn in Hell,

If that’s to be my fate,
But Love had to go,
It was too broken,
And it was too late.

Copyright Â© Alison ... [ 2006-06-15 23:04:22]
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Re: The Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 01:06:55 AM AEST
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Wow felt the power of that kill. Love dies everyday only to be arisen another day. Take care.

sadaddy

Re: The Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 01:56:07 AM AEST
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Amazing poem!
you did a great job in showing all the emotions behind it all.
I especially liked the first stanza because it speaks the truth
Looking forward in reading more of your work.
Best wishes,
~*Eve*~

Re: The Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by whiteleo1984 on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 08:01:26 AM AEST
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my heart jsut broke into a million pieces after I read this poem... this is the saddest thing I have ever read in my life, and I don't know what to think...

Re: The Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by marjanhr on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 10:21:33 AM AEST
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So BEAUTIFUL.Every line is pregnant with deep feelings.

Re: The Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by marjanhr on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 10:21:55 AM AEST
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So BEAUTIFUL.Every line is pregnant with deep feelings.

Re: The Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_in_waiting on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 10:33:35 AM AEST
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i hate to be repetetive, but WOW indeed ... i promise never to take love for granted again ... great emotional read

Re: The Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 11:55:28 AM AEST
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Powerful, inspiring and tinged with such sadness.
This truly is a moving piece

Steve

Re: The Death of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentlemanpoet on Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 12:23:30 PM AEST
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Very Good, I sure know about this, I've been there myself. I wish for thee love.

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