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Array ( [sid] => 122040 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => never good enough for you [time] => 2006-06-20 12:44:28 [hometext] => yeah this is to you dad. i hate you [bodytext] =>

i look into your eyes and all i see

is the disappointment and shame you have of me

all i am to you is a waste of life

cant you see your driving me to this knife?

every degrading look and stare

makes me die inside and pull my hair

cuz all i wanna do is make you proud

but you look at me as if i shouldnt make a sound

that u grab my throat an show me how mad you are

an i wish that i could run some where so damn far

you act like everything you do is right and just

because to you making me feel worthless is a must

did you even notice all of the scars i got?

of course you didnt, you wouldnt notice if i got shot

because of you i hate everything i am and will be

you are ashamed of every single bit of me

i'll never be good enough in anything that i ever do

so with this knife i say...good bye to you

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 72 [informant] => xforever_faking_a_smile3x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )
never good enough for you

Contributed by xforever_faking_a_smile3x on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 12:44:28 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry





i look into your eyes and all i see

is the disappointment and shame you have of me

all i am to you is a waste of life

cant you see your driving me to this knife?

every degrading look and stare

makes me die inside and pull my hair

cuz all i wanna do is make you proud

but you look at me as if i shouldnt make a sound

that u grab my throat an show me how mad you are

an i wish that i could run some where so damn far

you act like everything you do is right and just

because to you making me feel worthless is a must

did you even notice all of the scars i got?

of course you didnt, you wouldnt notice if i got shot

because of you i hate everything i am and will be

you are ashamed of every single bit of me

i'll never be good enough in anything that i ever do

so with this knife i say...good bye to you





Copyright © xforever_faking_a_smile3x ... [ 2006-06-20 12:44:28]
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Re: never good enough for you (User Rating: 1 )
by GurlyTye on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 02:59:23 PM AEST
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this is very intense... but a very colorfull write


Re: never good enough for you (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_in_waiting on Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 03:05:28 PM AEST
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jeeezzz ... very dark .. vivid ... there is no denying the feelings here ...



Re: never good enough for you (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 04:34:37 AM AEST
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it's intense alright, something painful about it too....


Re: never good enough for you (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 09:56:02 AM AEST
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wow...i know that look very well. great write, the pain is really coming through in this poem.
~lex~




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