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The birth of effervescent Tragedy

Painted with colors of the

s.o.u.l

A jubilee of scarlet despair

~Dancing~

One last crimson requiem
Across the tainted floors
Of my Flesh

W
i
l
t
i
n
g

Petals of a dying S A N I T Y

| S i l e n t | yearning for the long-awaited

The bitter sting of a
blade's final
kiss

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| R e q u i e m |

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 12:16:41 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

The birth of effervescent Tragedy

Painted with colors of the

s.o.u.l

A jubilee of scarlet despair

~Dancing~

One last crimson requiem
Across the tainted floors
Of my Flesh

W
i
l
t
i
n
g

Petals of a dying S A N I T Y

| S i l e n t | yearning for the long-awaited

The bitter sting of a
blade's final
kiss

This is it.

Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2006-06-27 12:16:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: | R e q u i e m | (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff9Man on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 01:16:46 PM AEST
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Many great elements here. To begin, the writing is powerful. Also, it's set up is a journey in itself. The same poem written in a plain format would not have so great an effect. Finally, I like how it begins so vague and ends so clear.

Short yet powerful, I like this poem

Re: | R e q u i e m | (User Rating: 1 )
by White_Raven on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 05:26:57 PM AEST
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Very Nice, Very Powerfull In Its Meaning.

Re: | R e q u i e m | (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 05:42:18 PM AEST
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Oh Stephy, this is torturous! Your writes are always so
completely emotional and moving ..

This was entirely sad and anguished, but incredibly
conveyed, as ever!!

Hoping everything is alright with you ..

*hugs*

~Breezy

Re: | R e q u i e m | (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 10:35:37 PM AEST
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oh Stephy this is incredible! Loved the style you used as well. Powerful and poetic write indeed. So nice to see you here tonight my little flower * smiles*

Michelle

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