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All the bad dreams

The time wasted

The friendships that she believes wont last



So she comes up with a plan

A plan that will take away all of her pain

This plan is the only thing left for her

It is what she truly desires



She has no date marked on her calendar

No one knows but her

She has the note written in fresh ink

One for her family and one to her best friend



She steps out of her room

Looking down the hallway to see if anyone is awake

For she wanted no one to stop her

Her plan of a way out



She gets the objects that she needs

And goes back into her room

She opens her window and looks at her favorite star

And says I am sorry I want to be with you once more



She reaches for the bottle of pills

Opening it and pouring them in her hand

She takes them two by two

Until all 106 of them were gone



Then she takes the knife

And cuts her wrist

Before she got to her other wrist

The phone rang



H.e.l.l.o. she said

The voice on the phone said are you okay I feel like something is wrong

She gasped for air and said, I finally did it. I am dying

But dont worry I love you and Ill be with you forever, goodbye I am sorry. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 36 [informant] => rollout89 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Her Plan

Contributed by rollout89 on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 10:15:48 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



She is tired of everything

All the bad dreams

The time wasted

The friendships that she believes wont last



So she comes up with a plan

A plan that will take away all of her pain

This plan is the only thing left for her

It is what she truly desires



She has no date marked on her calendar

No one knows but her

She has the note written in fresh ink

One for her family and one to her best friend



She steps out of her room

Looking down the hallway to see if anyone is awake

For she wanted no one to stop her

Her plan of a way out



She gets the objects that she needs

And goes back into her room

She opens her window and looks at her favorite star

And says I am sorry I want to be with you once more



She reaches for the bottle of pills

Opening it and pouring them in her hand

She takes them two by two

Until all 106 of them were gone



Then she takes the knife

And cuts her wrist

Before she got to her other wrist

The phone rang



H.e.l.l.o. she said

The voice on the phone said are you okay I feel like something is wrong

She gasped for air and said, I finally did it. I am dying

But dont worry I love you and Ill be with you forever, goodbye I am sorry.




Copyright © rollout89 ... [ 2006-06-28 10:15:48]
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Re: Her Plan (User Rating: 1 )
by Aeris030388 on Wednesday, 28th June 2006 @ 07:33:32 PM AEST
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This was very moving. The ending especially. Roxanne.


Re: Her Plan (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Thursday, 29th June 2006 @ 05:21:00 AM AEST
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thats not the answer nothing can be solved then, you only have one life its braver to stick it out and fight back..xxx


Re: Her Plan (User Rating: 1 )
by JordonsBaby17 on Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 12:59:08 AM AEST
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this poem gave me chills, and ive tried this! this is very touching! thank you!




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