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Array ( [sid] => 122820 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thoughts of why- fateful descovery [time] => 2006-07-06 06:17:54 [hometext] => Part 3 of 3 [bodytext] => I remember waking up one morning
to the sound of a sparrow on my cill.
This was going to be one of those lazy days-
all I was gonna do is chill.

After breakfast I heard someone knocking,
I opened the door and there he was standing.
From the look in his eyes there was no pretending-
this man knew what he was here for.

That morning, inhibition was a foreign concept.

In the aftermath of our carnal lustration
I got a strange feeling about this sinful situation>
You know the feeling of being watched
In the act of vicious violation.

I turned my head- there she was standing,
With tears in her eyes, she saw the whole thing unfolding.
I tried to talk to her, but she would not listen.
He told me to forget about her, as she is not worth it.
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 255 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Caged Soul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Thoughts of why- fateful descovery

Contributed by Caged Soul on Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 06:17:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I remember waking up one morning
to the sound of a sparrow on my cill.
This was going to be one of those lazy days-
all I was gonna do is chill.

After breakfast I heard someone knocking,
I opened the door and there he was standing.
From the look in his eyes there was no pretending-
this man knew what he was here for.

That morning, inhibition was a foreign concept.

In the aftermath of our carnal lustration
I got a strange feeling about this sinful situation>
You know the feeling of being watched
In the act of vicious violation.

I turned my head- there she was standing,
With tears in her eyes, she saw the whole thing unfolding.
I tried to talk to her, but she would not listen.
He told me to forget about her, as she is not worth it.

Copyright © Caged Soul ... [ 2006-07-06 06:17:54]
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Re: Thoughts of why- fateful descovery (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_in_waiting on Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 09:06:18 AM AEST
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way to go ... this story has been surprising and entertaining, after the first one, i didn't the see the rest coming at all. harsh ending

great write thnx for not leaving me hanging

cheers
sean

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