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Array ( [sid] => 122833 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What Seems So Perfect... [time] => 2006-07-06 14:16:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Standing in the middle of the ball looking great in my dress From My eyes to my chest from My Thighs to my feet And this is Where our eyes would Meet, Our eyes connect as i look myself over makin sure i look correct,I get in my Sexy Mode, Nodding at my girlfriend as if i was giving a Secert Code, i step to the man n Say " hello there, i must say u look Wonderul tonite" N the man Speaks " My Darlin you look wonderful also , I havent seen a such a pretty site" We exchange words, Things most woman never heard, Hes so smart, so Handsome, so sweet, I asked myself hes all that But does he cheat? We Walk Out of the Ball into the Hall where we can be alone n talk, we walk n walk , for what feels like hours in Thin heels, man this kills, we stop n sit for a while, talkin about his child, he starts to go on about some random things such as his eyes, his nose, to his clothes, for a wat seemed like a Perfect man, Hes awful strange, We take a walk in the park across the street, we start to kiss , n touch and you know what, i think to myself wat a perfect nite, Next thing you know hes got a gun to my head, sayin in 5 mins id be dead, never see my friends, who i stated to " ill be there to the end"never see my family, All these random thots pop into my head, tears start to roll down my face but i try to hold my grace, it isnt working should i plead for my life, or Go out like a champ? Body so cold face so damp , He screams n yells n says 2 mins to go *****, I plead for my life ***** it, im not even a wife , yet andstill this gun to my face, movin in a slow pace, toward my mouth he screams open wide, its ready to come inside, he lets go, in the newspaper it reads " Young Lady Shot Dead In Park " people say Oh She was Just Some Rich Hoe

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What Seems So Perfect...

Contributed by SunRaise on Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 02:16:38 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Standing in the middle of the ball looking great in my dress From My eyes to my chest from My Thighs to my feet And this is Where our eyes would Meet, Our eyes connect as i look myself over makin sure i look correct,I get in my Sexy Mode, Nodding at my girlfriend as if i was giving a Secert Code, i step to the man n Say " hello there, i must say u look Wonderul tonite" N the man Speaks " My Darlin you look wonderful also , I havent seen a such a pretty site" We exchange words, Things most woman never heard, Hes so smart, so Handsome, so sweet, I asked myself hes all that But does he cheat? We Walk Out of the Ball into the Hall where we can be alone n talk, we walk n walk , for what feels like hours in Thin heels, man this kills, we stop n sit for a while, talkin about his child, he starts to go on about some random things such as his eyes, his nose, to his clothes, for a wat seemed like a Perfect man, Hes awful strange, We take a walk in the park across the street, we start to kiss , n touch and you know what, i think to myself wat a perfect nite, Next thing you know hes got a gun to my head, sayin in 5 mins id be dead, never see my friends, who i stated to " ill be there to the end"never see my family, All these random thots pop into my head, tears start to roll down my face but i try to hold my grace, it isnt working should i plead for my life, or Go out like a champ? Body so cold face so damp , He screams n yells n says 2 mins to go *****, I plead for my life ***** it, im not even a wife , yet andstill this gun to my face, movin in a slow pace, toward my mouth he screams open wide, its ready to come inside, he lets go, in the newspaper it reads " Young Lady Shot Dead In Park " people say Oh She was Just Some Rich Hoe





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Re: What Seems So Perfect... (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 07:21:59 PM AEST
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i enjoted this...nice post..

wiz


Re: What Seems So Perfect... (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 07:22:41 PM AEST
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i meant to say 'i enjoyed this'

sorry
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