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Array ( [sid] => 122994 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Night out with the Girls [time] => 2006-07-10 14:01:22 [hometext] => Yes still like my night out with the girls. Sue x [bodytext] =>

Well last night was a night just for us girls,
The four of us said we would have a whirl,
Well two backed out ,which happens its true,
So Donna that just left me and you,

We went to a pizza place for something to eat,
But pasta we had , no stodge did we eat,
Then off to chicago, we took a trip,
Got to use our feet , yes dance a bit,

Well the place was quiet , not at its best,
And until eleven, was like the Marie Celeste,
The idiots were there , and the wierdos too,
Didn't we have a good time , watching you,

Then two men approached , and the mood it softened,
They used the old phrase, Do you come here often?
I want a real man I thought, So told him not to bother,
Well the truth was, I was old enough to be his mother,

Well I must admit , it made me feel great,
My life is not over, it isn't too late,
It did a lot for my confidence too,
Can't be that ugly, that is true,

Well dance we did, but then something went awry,
A drunken woman , she's another story,
Thought every woman was after her bloke,
She was aggressive, it was no joke,

So then we decided to make our way home,
Back to the weighbridge we did roam,
James, Donnas boyfriend, took us both home,
So here I am again on me own,

But next Friday I am out once again,
A hen party and just us ladies again,
We will behave, who am I kidding,
But life is for living, and yes we are women.

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A Night out with the Girls

Contributed by jerseysue on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 02:01:22 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry





Well last night was a night just for us girls,
The four of us said we would have a whirl,
Well two backed out ,which happens its true,
So Donna that just left me and you,

We went to a pizza place for something to eat,
But pasta we had , no stodge did we eat,
Then off to chicago, we took a trip,
Got to use our feet , yes dance a bit,

Well the place was quiet , not at its best,
And until eleven, was like the Marie Celeste,
The idiots were there , and the wierdos too,
Didn't we have a good time , watching you,

Then two men approached , and the mood it softened,
They used the old phrase, Do you come here often?
I want a real man I thought, So told him not to bother,
Well the truth was, I was old enough to be his mother,

Well I must admit , it made me feel great,
My life is not over, it isn't too late,
It did a lot for my confidence too,
Can't be that ugly, that is true,

Well dance we did, but then something went awry,
A drunken woman , she's another story,
Thought every woman was after her bloke,
She was aggressive, it was no joke,

So then we decided to make our way home,
Back to the weighbridge we did roam,
James, Donnas boyfriend, took us both home,
So here I am again on me own,

But next Friday I am out once again,
A hen party and just us ladies again,
We will behave, who am I kidding,
But life is for living, and yes we are women.





Copyright © jerseysue ... [ 2006-07-10 14:01:22]
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Re: A Night out with the Girls (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 02:12:08 PM AEST
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Ah yes. A miner's daughter be a woman too. Party hearty, Sue - out o' the castle o' glass. Neat story poem.
Live on!

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy


Re: A Night out with the Girls (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 03:59:16 PM AEST
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Wicked, I really like this... so getting older isn't just about pensions and bus passes? (only joking) lol,

Tuesday x


Re: A Night out with the Girls (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 04:29:37 PM AEST
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Sounds like a fun night Sue. We all need to get out and let loose
on occassion, don't we? I enjoyed this. It was fun to read. : )

~Breezy


Re: A Night out with the Girls (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 08:51:41 PM AEST
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Sue~
You go girl! Age is just a number my dear friend. Live life to the fullest and enjoy every minute of it. I hope next Friday night is a most enjoyable one and hey don't forget to fill me in okay, lol. Take care dearest Sue.
hugs n prayers,
sue m


Re: A Night out with the Girls (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 09:19:43 PM AEST
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I'll go............Yes, for only girls.! I remember MY 21st, 5 yrs ago...........MAN o man..........Just 9 girls, and a limo driver..........Well.....we made it home at 4 am.! Well cute lil write.!


Brew~


Re: A Night out with the Girls (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 11:54:24 PM AEST
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Thank you Sue. I needed a smile and your little adventure there sure gave me one.



Tim

*smiling big*






Re: A Night out with the Girls (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 01:07:59 AM AEST
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Sounds like fun.
Very good write.
huggs, big smiles,
emy


Re: A Night out with the Girls (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 10:14:32 AM AEST
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Hehe!


What a smile this gave me! A night out with 'the girls' is important for sure, and such fun too!! I have to admit; reading this has me kinda anxious for the weekend to come again! lol. Thanks for the smile : )



~Scorp.


Re: A Night out with the Girls (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 12:31:12 PM AEST
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Good write, Sue..Always great to have a night out....Hope the next one is even better...
Jenni




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