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Array ( [sid] => 123000 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So Satisfied [time] => 2006-07-10 15:56:41 [hometext] => Sorry for the crap poems lately, I've gone back to my old style....This one is inspired by a book I read [bodytext] => So cut me
Go on
You can't can you
You were always the weak one

The runt
And the midget
The one we could torture
And bully

A rain sodden parka
A pathetic thing
That's all we could see
We worked as one body

A collective will against your's
You didn't stand a chance
We ripped you apart
We didn't even make a sound

The eagles didn't see
In their naive and so called
Omniscience
They did their job well enough for us

And they saw the pain in your eyes
And the beat of your heart slow
As you stood on the bridge
They tried to call you and

Realised the fools they'd been not
To see what was happening
And we laughed and scoffed and reveled
In your misery

Then from the bowels of the
Mob, an unknown voice rose
Above the rest and inspired
The final words you'd hear

Jump
it shouted
Jump
it nearly sang
Jump
so gleeful
Jump
A bloodlust
Jump
two joined in
Jump
a chant was borne from these
Jump
oh how it spread
Jump
like tasting your blood
Jump
it rises and rises
Jump
sweet harmonies in my ear
Jump
you begin to see our collective wisdom
Jump
or what's left for you here
Jump
Jump
JUMP
JUMP
JUMP
JUMP
JUMP
JUMP
JUMP

And your knuckles white on the bar
Begin to slip with clammy fingers
And we feel the tension
Reaches an imense climax
And you,
as if in slow motion,
Fall, our victim
Our job completed
We walk away
So Satisfied [comments] => 4 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 13 [informant] => somnium [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
So Satisfied

Contributed by somnium on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 03:56:41 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



So cut me
Go on
You can't can you
You were always the weak one

The runt
And the midget
The one we could torture
And bully

A rain sodden parka
A pathetic thing
That's all we could see
We worked as one body

A collective will against your's
You didn't stand a chance
We ripped you apart
We didn't even make a sound

The eagles didn't see
In their naive and so called
Omniscience
They did their job well enough for us

And they saw the pain in your eyes
And the beat of your heart slow
As you stood on the bridge
They tried to call you and

Realised the fools they'd been not
To see what was happening
And we laughed and scoffed and reveled
In your misery

Then from the bowels of the
Mob, an unknown voice rose
Above the rest and inspired
The final words you'd hear

Jump
it shouted
Jump
it nearly sang
Jump
so gleeful
Jump
A bloodlust
Jump
two joined in
Jump
a chant was borne from these
Jump
oh how it spread
Jump
like tasting your blood
Jump
it rises and rises
Jump
sweet harmonies in my ear
Jump
you begin to see our collective wisdom
Jump
or what's left for you here
Jump
Jump
JUMP
JUMP
JUMP
JUMP
JUMP
JUMP
JUMP

And your knuckles white on the bar
Begin to slip with clammy fingers
And we feel the tension
Reaches an imense climax
And you,
as if in slow motion,
Fall, our victim
Our job completed
We walk away
So Satisfied




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Re: So Satisfied (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 04:02:05 PM AEST
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Really nice piece, kept me intrigued all the way through, thoroughly enjoyed it!!! You certainly have a rather unique style, thanks for sharing,

2sdyx


Re: So Satisfied (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 04:40:57 PM AEST
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Nicely written..
God Bless!


Re: So Satisfied (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 11:17:06 AM AEST
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Very Very deep.Very interesting technique, and cleary bottled up anger. Nicely done when brought out into a writing. Take care. Kimberly


Re: So Satisfied (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 19th September 2006 @ 08:49:56 AM AEST
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This was brillant.. I liked how it was for me anyways a poem that i had to finish... It pulled me in... I liked how you used this style and how you worded it... It was great..

Take care
christina




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