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And send it through the stars

Around the sun and thru the drops of Neptune

Send it somewhere far.

Give me a memory

To wrap around my heart

Let me take you to Venus

Show you where it all starts.

Take the rings of Jupiter

And tangle them in my hair

Put Mars’ fire in my eyes

Come and let us share

The warmth of Mercury’s radiance

And swim thru Earth’s waters

Sit atop Uranus’ moons

And defy all laws of matter

Indulge yourself in the beauty of it all

And then we will travel the universe again

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Journey through the Stars

Contributed by keilantra on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 08:11:33 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Take a picture for me

And send it through the stars

Around the sun and thru the drops of Neptune

Send it somewhere far.

Give me a memory

To wrap around my heart

Let me take you to Venus

Show you where it all starts.

Take the rings of Jupiter

And tangle them in my hair

Put Mars’ fire in my eyes

Come and let us share

The warmth of Mercury’s radiance

And swim thru Earth’s waters

Sit atop Uranus’ moons

And defy all laws of matter

Indulge yourself in the beauty of it all

And then we will travel the universe again

Copyright Â© keilantra ... [ 2006-07-10 20:11:33]
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Re: Journey through the Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 08:32:19 PM AEST
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Kei~
A beautiful and most uplifting piece of poetry.
You warm up ones heart and take them on a breath taking journey through ur world~
Thank you for the smiles.
Take care,
warm hugs,
sue m

Re: Journey through the Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by Logan on Monday, 10th July 2006 @ 10:12:34 PM AEST
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This is a great piece of poetry. I cant explain it, but i felt this poem. I really enjoyed this poem.

Re: Journey through the Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 02:34:59 AM AEST
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I applaud
I really like this flow

Re: Journey through the Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 10:17:12 AM AEST
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Loving the explicit imagery your wording presents to the reader....Very nice!! Beautiful title to go along with your write...I enjoyed this!

Keep it up : )

Scorp.

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