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Lonely nights

Even when your here

Lonely days

Even when your there

Lonely tears

On my face

Lonely tears

Im such a disgrace

Lonely Life

Even though were husband and wife

Lonely years

So many leers

Lonely forever

That my soul did sever

Lonely forever

I endeavor,to make you happy

Lonely forever

Inside I only feel crappy

Lonely till I die
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Lonely

Contributed by SunRaise on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 04:40:02 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Lonely nights

Even when your here

Lonely days

Even when your there

Lonely tears

On my face

Lonely tears

Im such a disgrace

Lonely Life

Even though were husband and wife

Lonely years

So many leers

Lonely forever

That my soul did sever

Lonely forever

I endeavor,to make you happy

Lonely forever

Inside I only feel crappy

Lonely till I die

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Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by seci on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 04:54:20 PM AEST
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i really like this poem but i can't understand why you feel this way. i wish you the best and keep writing your feelings i will promise even if i am the only one keep reading your poems.

Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 11th July 2006 @ 07:25:16 PM AEST
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this is a very powerful write.. its very well expressed.. I love the flow of it.. I understand how you feel.. you can be with someone and still feel lonley.. hang in there.. I hope things get better for ya.. very well expressed and well laid out.. thanks for sharing

JENNITTUDE

Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Davinah on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 05:56:28 AM AEST
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Very well done...

~D~

Re: Lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Wednesday, 12th July 2006 @ 09:39:20 AM AEST
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A discouraging sad poem. It seems that your in a far off place in this poem, looking at yourself in a lonely situation. Very compelling write. Great read. Kimberly

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