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Array ( [sid] => 12329 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Tears that fall [time] => 2003-02-10 04:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Do you ever need someone to hold
you.
To let you know that you exist.
Or do you cut into your own flesh
simply to know that you are here,and
you are a living loving being
whose blood flows out of
your many wounds and
then hopes that someone
will care enough help you
heal completely and not
just put a band aid in place
and then walk away.
I have felt such sadness
that I could not seem to cry hard
enough.
Only to hear that I will live through it. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 32 [informant] => POOBEAR [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Tears that fall

Contributed by POOBEAR on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Do you ever need someone to hold
you.
To let you know that you exist.
Or do you cut into your own flesh
simply to know that you are here,and
you are a living loving being
whose blood flows out of
your many wounds and
then hopes that someone
will care enough help you
heal completely and not
just put a band aid in place
and then walk away.
I have felt such sadness
that I could not seem to cry hard
enough.
Only to hear that I will live through it.

Copyright © POOBEAR ... [ 2003-02-10 04:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Tears that fall (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSpiritx on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 04:04:38 AM AEST
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I know this feeling. All I can say is to try. Thanks for sharing this.

Re: Tears that fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 04:30:21 PM AEST
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Oh yes! Very much so! A brilliant way to express deep emotions in such a few lines. Well done.
Luv,
Robert Edgar Burns

Re: Tears that fall (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 09:30:21 AM AEST
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very well said ..excellent
good write ...you said it .so succinctly

well done

peace be your journey

terry

Re: Tears that fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 09:47:24 AM AEST
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I like this.

Re: Tears that fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 10:30:51 PM AEST
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Very well expressed. Good write!
Saira

Re: Tears that fall (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 07:13:51 PM AEST
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HI ,POOBEAR,
THIS IS A VERY SAD POEM,BUT I THINK I KNOW WHAT YOU WERE
GOING THROUGH.VERY MOVEING,GOOD YOU CAN TELL IT HEART FELT.

Re: Tears that fall (User Rating: 1 )
by ravenfire on Sunday, 17th August 2003 @ 11:17:52 AM AEST
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this poem reminds me of someone i used to be. i know someone who will help you heal completely and will NEVER walk away, even though you have so many times.
i am unworthy but i have been healed.

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