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Sacrifice
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 02:02:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I wish I could escape this feeling as
it stings and burns my heart
my soul outpouring a bloody mess
and I have little left to hurt for
he took away my inabilities
and left me vacant, vulnerable and torn.
I fell apart
and my life is killing me
suicidal thoughts,
they occupy my barren mind
A knife, a pen, a shard of glass
I am no more
just incomplete
And now I'm on my knees
begging
pleading
bargaining with God
my tears streaming down my face
I cursed him for not saving me
not sparing me my life
As suicidal as my thoughts,
...I will not be my sacrifice
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2006-07-20 14:02:26]
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Re: Sacrifice
(User Rating: 1 )
by True on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 10:05:09 PM AEST
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| Interesting poem. I imagine there is a long story behind it. I applaud you for using free verse, many insist on using rhyme, like it's the only thing that makes something poetry. Thank you for recognizing that the right words for a rhyme aren't always the right words. |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 01:19:39 AM AEST
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| Again..such a great poet...your the only person so far that I've liked every poem I've read |
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