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By Fernando Castillo

He is the father who abandoned his children in their moment of great need
I cried for salvation, deliverance from pain
Nevertheless he paid no heed
Streams of tears flooded my hollow of eyes of despair
The pain I endured will forever be beyond compare
My life deteriorated, decayed and rotted
To be food for the starved worms
Pulsating swan song of harmonious discord
Tranquil cacophony
My callous heart abhorred
As I laid, dying for the elucidation of life
I conceded my defeat
Succumb to God’s malice
This pain inflamed
Eternal abiding wretchedness
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Denied By God

Contributed by axeman on Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 10:06:23 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Denied By God
By Fernando Castillo

He is the father who abandoned his children in their moment of great need
I cried for salvation, deliverance from pain
Nevertheless he paid no heed
Streams of tears flooded my hollow of eyes of despair
The pain I endured will forever be beyond compare
My life deteriorated, decayed and rotted
To be food for the starved worms
Pulsating swan song of harmonious discord
Tranquil cacophony
My callous heart abhorred
As I laid, dying for the elucidation of life
I conceded my defeat
Succumb to God’s malice
This pain inflamed
Eternal abiding wretchedness

Copyright Â© axeman ... [ 2006-07-20 22:06:23]
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Re: Denied By God (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 05:15:19 AM AEST
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Well done, deep and strong, thanks for the read, I enjoyed the write.

The Phantom

Re: Denied By God (User Rating: 1 )
by Tashy on Wednesday, 15th October 2008 @ 05:23:14 AM AEST
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such a powerfulpoem.
i can relate.
=]

Re: Denied By God (User Rating: 1 )
by Alphadux on Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 09:15:54 PM AEST
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There's a lot of feeling in this and you use a variety of words which is good. And if I may inject my faith into the comment: "All who call upon the Lord will be saved". He won't deny those who come to Him.

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