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By Fernando Castillo

A cold mirror covered in memories of snow and ice
Reveals more than a dead’s end.
I see beyond my eyes starring back hard.
Through the mirror I watch myself dying.
I scream and yell for help, but I feel no one come to my side
I see others around me, my eyes cut through theirs
Feeling that I am all alone
Who’s there to help myself when it has lost control
There is nothing I can do to save me from my doom
I await my pending death, it feels no need to rush, ever taking its time
It knows it has already won
I no longer feel to scream and yell for help
I am no longer alone
Fear, torment, and pain hold me by my wrist
As I walk the earth
Dead inside
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Dead Inside

Contributed by axeman on Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 10:08:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dead Inside
By Fernando Castillo

A cold mirror covered in memories of snow and ice
Reveals more than a dead’s end.
I see beyond my eyes starring back hard.
Through the mirror I watch myself dying.
I scream and yell for help, but I feel no one come to my side
I see others around me, my eyes cut through theirs
Feeling that I am all alone
Who’s there to help myself when it has lost control
There is nothing I can do to save me from my doom
I await my pending death, it feels no need to rush, ever taking its time
It knows it has already won
I no longer feel to scream and yell for help
I am no longer alone
Fear, torment, and pain hold me by my wrist
As I walk the earth
Dead inside

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Re: Dead Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 05:17:36 AM AEST
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This is a great piece of poetic art, I enjoyed the read, thanks.

The Phantom

Re: Dead Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 08:55:38 PM AEST
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Incredible write, almost gave me goosebumps its so intense.

Michelle

Re: Dead Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 11:28:31 PM AEST
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wonderful write. I know exactly what you mean. it is really deep.
luvs ya
jess

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