Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 02-June 12:09:52 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 123572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => one hell of a love scar [time] => 2006-07-23 02:37:09 [hometext] => Everyone has at least 1 [bodytext] => It appeared when you disappeared.
You was my wound!!
When you left it came.
Sitting in the corners of my room feeling sorry for myself crying ,shaking,wiping my nose asking myself over & over...
What did i do? What didnt i do? Thinking of answers and ways to get you back.... For what just to go through all this again? Why? Why put myself through it? Make myself sick? Just in hopes to get your attention for a short period of time!?
Let him go ..Be strong.. you deserve much better .. In time it will get better!
Get better?? How long do i have to wait?
How do i trust again? when do i let my feelings show?
& let my gaurd down? Will i love again? Will someone love me back?

This is crazy... Im talkin to myself...
HOLD ON A MIN!! I need a cigarette!!
I dont know how much more i can take! Im trying to deal...
When will this go away? Maybe someday?
I dunno i hope but this is one hell of a LOVE SCAR!....











[comments] => 4 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 43 [informant] => MiZzUnDaZtOoD [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
one hell of a love scar

Contributed by MiZzUnDaZtOoD on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:37:09 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



It appeared when you disappeared.
You was my wound!!
When you left it came.
Sitting in the corners of my room feeling sorry for myself crying ,shaking,wiping my nose asking myself over & over...
What did i do? What didnt i do? Thinking of answers and ways to get you back.... For what just to go through all this again? Why? Why put myself through it? Make myself sick? Just in hopes to get your attention for a short period of time!?
Let him go ..Be strong.. you deserve much better .. In time it will get better!
Get better?? How long do i have to wait?
How do i trust again? when do i let my feelings show?
& let my gaurd down? Will i love again? Will someone love me back?

This is crazy... Im talkin to myself...
HOLD ON A MIN!! I need a cigarette!!
I dont know how much more i can take! Im trying to deal...
When will this go away? Maybe someday?
I dunno i hope but this is one hell of a LOVE SCAR!....















Copyright © MiZzUnDaZtOoD ... [ 2006-07-23 02:37:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: one hell of a love scar (User Rating: 1 )
by Immortal-Dragon21 on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 03:12:26 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
this is a good tale of loss it took me back to times when i was upset for the same reason powerful work


Re: one hell of a love scar (User Rating: 1 )
by kttykttywfreckls on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:05:42 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
yes every one has at least one of these.... dejavu.


Re: one hell of a love scar (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:56:29 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Don't give up dear. You wouldn't be sitting there feeling so badly, if your relationship with him was pretty!
You must kiss many frogs before you find your wonderful Prince.....someone who will not leave you, but love you very much!
Wonderful feeling poem
Warm love
Lovingcritters
consue


Re: one hell of a love scar (User Rating: 1 )
by evolon on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 06:03:57 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
theres no cure for the pain, all you can do is let it run it path, cus at the end of it all bumps and bruises will show and then you'll find the 1 person willing to be there understanding and all... trust me we all walked this road just rem.. ya not alone ....nice write keep it up.....
evolon




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com