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You Asked So I Came
Contributed by
deadclown
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Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 07:14:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Death and destruction
My evil seduction
Fall down at my alter
Succumb to corruption
Disclose all your secrets
I'll tear them to pieces
Replace your desires
Your mine at your weakest
Believe in my cruelty
suggestion won't fool me
I know why you want this
There's sadness in beauty
Macabre seems romantic
You love all that's tragic
That's why you'll embrace me
Obsession runs frantic
And when your desire's through
Don't think that I'll stay true
When pain seems appealing
Then I will come find you
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2006-07-23 07:14:37]
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Re: You Asked So I Came
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by jono on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 07:33:19 AM AEST
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that might be suitable in phsycotic poems
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Re: You Asked So I Came
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by jono on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 08:20:40 AM AEST
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| I didn't mean to dis you |
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Re: You Asked So I Came
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by jono on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 10:19:48 AM AEST
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| oh! ok nice poem! |
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Re: You Asked So I Came
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 03:13:29 PM AEST
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| This one is a good write and there is great visualization in the words in this poem very dark but yet very satisfying to read. Thx for your comment on my piece�.Steve |
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Re: You Asked So I Came
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 04:16:21 PM AEST
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| Pretty good, it was a really dark read, enjoyable. |
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Re: You Asked So I Came
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Wednesday, 13th September 2006 @ 12:41:03 PM AEST
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This is so well done. It's beautiful actually.
"Macabre seems romantic
You love all that's tragic
That's why you'll embrace me
Obsession runs frantic"
That's my favorite part.
So come for your embrace... |
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