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In the end of August is when we fell apart
In the end of August is when my life took a turn
In the end of August is when I felt real heart burn

The pain lasted through out the fall
When I never heard your voice or received a call

The pain lasted through out the winter
When it was cold, and I was bitter

The pain lasted through out the spring
When flowers bloomed and birds would sing

Although the summer has gone by fast
I still remember our vast past

Last August is when you broke my heart
Last august is when I fell apart

The end of July is approaching quick
This August I no longer will be heart sick
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End of August

Contributed by epsftbllchic1617 on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 11:34:08 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

In the end of August you broke my heart
In the end of August is when we fell apart
In the end of August is when my life took a turn
In the end of August is when I felt real heart burn

The pain lasted through out the fall
When I never heard your voice or received a call

The pain lasted through out the winter
When it was cold, and I was bitter

The pain lasted through out the spring
When flowers bloomed and birds would sing

Although the summer has gone by fast
I still remember our vast past

Last August is when you broke my heart
Last august is when I fell apart

The end of July is approaching quick
This August I no longer will be heart sick

Copyright © epsftbllchic1617 ... [ 2006-07-23 11:34:08]
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Re: End of August (User Rating: 1 )
by kttykttywfreckls on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 01:16:59 PM AEST
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nice.

Re: End of August (User Rating: 1 )
by jono on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 01:49:55 PM AEST
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clever a whole year cycle.

Re: End of August (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Young_Poet on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:20:01 PM AEST
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nice, you described how you felt through all the seasons. Very good.

Re: End of August (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:35:09 PM AEST
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ha, good write, i like how you address your heartache throughout the poem, then at the end say that you will no longer be captive to it.

xXx

~kei

Re: End of August (User Rating: 1 )
by evolon on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 06:32:12 PM AEST
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full circle ...nice

Re: End of August (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 08:36:10 PM AEST
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I was in this exact same place 2 years ago. It brought back alot of memories, believe me, i wish i had forgotten, but it's always there when you love someone that much. A very compelling compilation for me. Thankyou for posting this, and i hope you can get through this as i have. Take care, Kimberly

Re: End of August (User Rating: 1 )
by chulysnacky on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 08:57:59 PM AEST
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very natural and full of emotion, great write, I enjoy reading poems like this. I too shared a similar experience and it's not easy, but time heals all.!!!

Re: End of August (User Rating: 1 )
by chulysnacky on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 08:59:23 PM AEST
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very natural and full of emotion, great write, I enjoy reading poems like this. I too shared a similar experience and it's not easy, but time heals all.!!! My birthday happens to be in august.

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