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Array ( [sid] => 123606 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Our Book [time] => 2006-07-23 19:58:43 [hometext] => A sacred book between two lovers turned to trash [bodytext] => When we were going out, you see
I made a book all about you and me
I made two copies so we wouldn't have to share
Whenever I held it, I used great care
A ticket stub here from our first date
A movie we later agreed on with mutual hate
Here are some photos of us taken together
Us in swim suits in the sunny weather
Contatined are all the notes you wrote me
And all the emails you will never again see
The printed lyrics to our song
Now when I hear it, it just sounds wrong
The book went from my shelf to under my bed
where our relationship lies dead
The pages imprinted with thoughts of us
As the book lies in darkness and dust
This book will be with me always
And for the rest of my days
It is something that is close to my heart
Also sad images of us falling apart
If I had one wish, it would truly be
That you would keep this book forever and never forget me [comments] => 4 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 22 [informant] => epsftbllchic1617 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Our Book

Contributed by epsftbllchic1617 on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 07:58:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

When we were going out, you see
I made a book all about you and me
I made two copies so we wouldn't have to share
Whenever I held it, I used great care
A ticket stub here from our first date
A movie we later agreed on with mutual hate
Here are some photos of us taken together
Us in swim suits in the sunny weather
Contatined are all the notes you wrote me
And all the emails you will never again see
The printed lyrics to our song
Now when I hear it, it just sounds wrong
The book went from my shelf to under my bed
where our relationship lies dead
The pages imprinted with thoughts of us
As the book lies in darkness and dust
This book will be with me always
And for the rest of my days
It is something that is close to my heart
Also sad images of us falling apart
If I had one wish, it would truly be
That you would keep this book forever and never forget me

Copyright © epsftbllchic1617 ... [ 2006-07-23 19:58:43]
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Re: Our Book (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 08:46:22 PM AEST
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a sweet and sour write. to put it simply, heartbreak sucks and i think you did a good job expressing it. keep up the writing!

Re: Our Book (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 08:47:20 PM AEST
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a sweet and sour write. to put it simply, heartbreak sucks and i think you did a good job expressing it. keep up the writing!

Re: Our Book (User Rating: 1 )
by chaos78 on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 12:15:58 AM AEST
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good poem i really enjoyed the read

Re: Our Book (User Rating: 1 )
by True on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 01:03:20 AM AEST
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Sometimes it's nice to think that even though things didn't turn out the way you hoped that other people would still think back on you and smile and know that it was worth it anyway.

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