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Array ( [sid] => 123631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Path [time] => 2006-07-24 09:27:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The path that I choose was long and hard
that left me with so many scars and not
just the ones that I put on my arms or the
mark that has stain this heart for the road
was to much to bear wish I never toke it there
I move so many object that lied in my way
I fallen so many times but away pick myself
back up for you were always there someone I
thought who care now the mountains that you
have put in the path are so hard to pass and
each time I make it pass one there another and
I’m slowly lose hope that I will never make it
to the end maybe I should just give up again
and let myself fall I’m so sick of it all why
should I climb back up just to be push backdown
did I go the wrong way or did I lose my bearing
when will this road become flat or will it put me
dead on my back [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 22 [informant] => chaos78 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Path

Contributed by chaos78 on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 09:27:46 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

The path that I choose was long and hard
that left me with so many scars and not
just the ones that I put on my arms or the
mark that has stain this heart for the road
was to much to bear wish I never toke it there
I move so many object that lied in my way
I fallen so many times but away pick myself
back up for you were always there someone I
thought who care now the mountains that you
have put in the path are so hard to pass and
each time I make it pass one there another and
I’m slowly lose hope that I will never make it
to the end maybe I should just give up again
and let myself fall I’m so sick of it all why
should I climb back up just to be push backdown
did I go the wrong way or did I lose my bearing
when will this road become flat or will it put me
dead on my back

Copyright Â© chaos78 ... [ 2006-07-24 09:27:46]
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Re: Path (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 10:09:18 AM AEST
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I know you have to pick your self up again, its so hard but many times I have done it.. Still trying and on the same road..so sad but lovely poem. xxxx

Re: Path (User Rating: 1 )
by kttykttywfreckls on Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 01:20:20 PM AEST
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I have felt the same and it gets better just have to keep pushing forward.

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