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Autumns on its’ way,
Feel the coolness in the air-
The rain, its’ soon to come
And spoil our delicate clothes.
Be weary not of this garden
We’ve had a wonderful life,
Let harsh winds scatter our petals
And cut us down like a knife.
My lovely, lovely sweet maroon
When you hear that last bell chime,
And just before night shows the moon
My bittersweet flower-
No longer will we be grieving,
For soon when comes the hour-
Praises be, our joy-de-light
Is waiting in our new yard,
To kiss us both good night!

RaquelLeah DuPont
Monday, July 31, 2006
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My Lovely, Lovely Rose

Contributed by RLWildPassions on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 06:19:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

My lovely, lovely rose
Autumns on its’ way,
Feel the coolness in the air-
The rain, its’ soon to come
And spoil our delicate clothes.
Be weary not of this garden
We’ve had a wonderful life,
Let harsh winds scatter our petals
And cut us down like a knife.
My lovely, lovely sweet maroon
When you hear that last bell chime,
And just before night shows the moon
My bittersweet flower-
No longer will we be grieving,
For soon when comes the hour-
Praises be, our joy-de-light
Is waiting in our new yard,
To kiss us both good night!

RaquelLeah DuPont
Monday, July 31, 2006

Copyright Â© RLWildPassions ... [ 2006-07-31 18:19:57]
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Re: My Lovely, Lovely Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 07:28:16 PM AEST
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exquiste and lovely, Raquel, your beauty and emotion gently flow in this piece. I sense a sadness, but with a promise of eternal happiness in the end.

Hugs Hugs Hugs Hugs

Re: My Lovely, Lovely Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by RLWildPassions on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 07:37:36 PM AEST
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not really, just used an emotion in order to satisfy my soul for a write this morning... just a poetess, thank you for your concern.. hugs valentine girl.. rL

Re: My Lovely, Lovely Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 09:35:46 PM AEST
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Quite beautiful Raquel a poem of many colors and emotions. *****

((((((Raquel))))))

Ben

Re: My Lovely, Lovely Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 08:38:16 PM AEST
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This is beauiful...The rose is my favorite flower...
Written well...
God Bless you & your...
C.S..

Re: My Lovely, Lovely Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by randumbchit on Wednesday, 18th October 2006 @ 09:57:14 AM AEST
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww very elegant
i love the sybolism of the garden and changing of seasons

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