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each day passes
I am without

a new life emerges
but missing pieces flow through
the veins of my soul
all things of the past have taken their toll

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the past takes a toll on you

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 11:42:45 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Surging pain within
each day passes
I am without

a new life emerges
but missing pieces flow through
the veins of my soul
all things of the past have taken their toll

JENNI

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Re: the past takes a toll on you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 12:20:32 PM AEST
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Short but very powerful write, Jenn..
and you are so right, the past does take a toll on us.
But writing it out helps us release some of that, no?
A process of sorts ..

Great write.

~Breezy

Re: the past takes a toll on you (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 01:09:02 PM AEST
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Powerful Jen and yes I do relate .
I loved the way you presented this.

Your never alone Im here for ya sis!

Michelle

Re: the past takes a toll on you (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 05:58:55 PM AEST
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Yes I can relate to this. I also feel like this sometimes. You put it into words very well. Thanks for sharing. Sue xx

Re: the past takes a toll on you (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 06:07:53 PM AEST
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Very powerful piece, in such a small package. Wonderful Jen. "all things of the past have taken their toll". So true.
Peace and hugs,
Laurabean

Re: the past takes a toll on you (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 12:42:53 PM AEST
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powerful and deep... This was very well expressed... Can relate...

Take care
christina

Re: the past takes a toll on you (User Rating: 1 )
by ravensofthedark on Friday, 24th November 2006 @ 08:18:38 AM AEST
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nice poem although short it's still good poetry

~The Raven

Re: the past takes a toll on you (User Rating: 1 )
by CuriousitysCat on Wednesday, 10th January 2007 @ 07:41:25 PM AEST
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I love this poem, it truely was a deep relation I felt reading it. As much as the past used to bother me to think about [the deep dark parts that few but yourself could ever know of] all the poetry I ever wrote to try and relieve myself of the rawness of the past could never justify it such as this poem does...

;]

~Jazz

P.s.>
Thanks for putting this piece on here, it was awesome to read.

Re: the past takes a toll on you (User Rating: 1 )
by trueecho on Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 10:07:32 AM AEST
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yes, youre making me smile again..good write
Mike trueecho

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