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Array ( [sid] => 124240 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Does She Have Hope? [time] => 2006-08-08 22:20:25 [hometext] => difficult to explain but basically its about someone trying to help a child but wonders if its possible. the child is based on my experences [bodytext] => when you look at her
you often question what you see
do you see hope in her
or do you know she has no chance

as your staring at her
saying to yourself...
she not worth much, so let her be
so she can end her life of tragedy
its horrible these days
how quickly the young grow old

you have tried so hard to let this child free
free from the life she leads
the life of physical and sexual abuse
the violence, drugs and abandonment
all so much for a child of just fourteen

wondering if you could have been there
just before she turned age three
could you have made a difference
big enough to fill the childs hopes and dreams
or was she a child destined to
live and end her life in tragedy
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 31 [informant] => carebear_06 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

Does She Have Hope?

Contributed by carebear_06 on Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 10:20:25 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

when you look at her
you often question what you see
do you see hope in her
or do you know she has no chance

as your staring at her
saying to yourself...
she not worth much, so let her be
so she can end her life of tragedy
its horrible these days
how quickly the young grow old

you have tried so hard to let this child free
free from the life she leads
the life of physical and sexual abuse
the violence, drugs and abandonment
all so much for a child of just fourteen

wondering if you could have been there
just before she turned age three
could you have made a difference
big enough to fill the childs hopes and dreams
or was she a child destined to
live and end her life in tragedy

Copyright © carebear_06 ... [ 2006-08-08 22:20:25]
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Re: Does She Have Hope? (User Rating: 1 )
by falling_shadows_of_terror on Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 01:31:49 AM AEST
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That was great. I really do like it because in a way it describes some of the things I have been through in my life, so I can relate to it. Very descriptive, very nicely writen.

Re: Does She Have Hope? (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 02:13:07 AM AEST
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Yes there is hope for her my dear friend. She just needs that extra love and attention. It's gonna take alot of work, but can you imagine the difference you would have made to this girl's life. Everyone deserves a second chance. A write filled with alot of hope. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. All the best to you~
warm hugs,
sue m

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