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Array ( [sid] => 124242 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Storm [time] => 2006-08-08 23:15:55 [hometext] => when the rain comes down, it falls with inspiration. [bodytext] => The rain comes with clarity.
I can breathe again, be again.
Reason. Reflection. Rehabilitation.

The dying summer left scalds on our thoughts.

We don’t need magic
To dance between the raindrops.
Our God shines-
He is the moon;
Love is our religion
Taking place under the budding stars.
Bodiless figures connect –
Indistinguishable.

And we are the leaves
Being swept together by the wind,
Furiously twirling around branches;
Sensuality
comes in the strangest forms.
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Storm

Contributed by keilantra on Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 11:15:55 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

The rain comes with clarity.
I can breathe again, be again.
Reason. Reflection. Rehabilitation.

The dying summer left scalds on our thoughts.

We don’t need magic
To dance between the raindrops.
Our God shines-
He is the moon;
Love is our religion
Taking place under the budding stars.
Bodiless figures connect –
Indistinguishable.

And we are the leaves
Being swept together by the wind,
Furiously twirling around branches;
Sensuality
comes in the strangest forms.

Copyright Â© keilantra ... [ 2006-08-08 23:15:55]
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Re: Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by RLWildPassions on Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 11:44:58 PM AEST
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Beautifully said, ty

Re: Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 12:47:06 AM AEST
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Beautiful.. your words-
FS is best for me.. and the others, just as well~

Sincerely..

B

Re: Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 01:34:59 AM AEST
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Kei~
You are a very talented and gifted Miss who can leave her reader in awe everytime. I have come to love ur style of writings Kei~ You've got what it takes girl~ Keep it up.
warm hugs,
sue m

Re: Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 07:09:18 PM AEST
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Oh kei .. so incredibly beautiful! You have an inherent
talent here .. use it; nurture it; RELISH it, dear girl!!

So many images to feast upon in this, a masterful
command of words and metaphors ..

Gloriously stunning!!

~Breezy

Re: Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 09:38:19 PM AEST
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I adore this. It reminds me, actually, of something that I wrote not to long ago - and because of that, I feel as if I exist somewhere inside of these words. I always feel a bit uncomfortably bold saying that I find a piece relatable... for it is, always, first and foremost, the poet's moment --- but I cannot help but do so here.

There is so much here... and it is, entirely, beautiful.

~Snemmy

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