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Array ( [sid] => 124281 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I shouldn't [time] => 2006-08-09 23:27:55 [hometext] => Please submit comments on my poetry [bodytext] => I sit here thinking tonight
We have done it for way to long
You may think its right
But it is definately wrong
If you love me
Then how could you say that
You told me you hated me
And now you are asking for me back
I don't know what to say
I don't know what to do
I have asked God
If he would just please give me a clue
I don't think that I would
I told myself that I shouldn't
A part of me wants to
But a part of me wouldn't
I know my heart will disolve
I know it will hurt
It already has
You made me feel like dirt
I can't believe you would say that
You are good at making me feel like crap
You've broken my heart one to many times
In my book, you've committed the worst of all crimes
You've hurt me
And now you want to fix it
Your proposal sounds like crap
You should take it and shove it
You can forget us
You can forget me
You still want to be friends
Thats all we should ever be
You've torn me in half
You have broken me down
There's nothing left of me
My heart hardly makes a sound
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 48 [informant] => dh_guitarist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
I shouldn't

Contributed by dh_guitarist on Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 11:27:55 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I sit here thinking tonight
We have done it for way to long
You may think its right
But it is definately wrong
If you love me
Then how could you say that
You told me you hated me
And now you are asking for me back
I don't know what to say
I don't know what to do
I have asked God
If he would just please give me a clue
I don't think that I would
I told myself that I shouldn't
A part of me wants to
But a part of me wouldn't
I know my heart will disolve
I know it will hurt
It already has
You made me feel like dirt
I can't believe you would say that
You are good at making me feel like crap
You've broken my heart one to many times
In my book, you've committed the worst of all crimes
You've hurt me
And now you want to fix it
Your proposal sounds like crap
You should take it and shove it
You can forget us
You can forget me
You still want to be friends
Thats all we should ever be
You've torn me in half
You have broken me down
There's nothing left of me
My heart hardly makes a sound




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Re: I shouldn't (User Rating: 1 )
by richcol7522 on Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 01:27:15 AM AEST
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You did a really good job...Im going through something similar to this right now in my own life. I particularly liked the first four lines. Please feel free to read any of my work. I look forward to your comments. I look forward to reading more of you work. keep up the good work.

Rich


Re: I shouldn't (User Rating: 1 )
by midian on Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 04:43:09 AM AEST
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i can't say how much this has touched me i'm quite literally blubbering like an old lady... i used to get that all the time when i was arguing with my partner but anyway i found this poem to be wonderfully inspiring and to have powerfull emotions attached to it. beautifal write xx

~Between the gates of, Heavan and Hell~
Midian




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