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Array ( [sid] => 124295 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Beautiful Secret [time] => 2006-08-10 11:46:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => her body is up
against mine.
i feel the rise and
fall of her chest
& feel the curves
of her breast

i look into her eyes,
feel her arms around me
and i know;
when i am with her
there is no need for
a disguise

we kiss
& i never knew
it could feel like this...
so much beauty,
so much love,
nothing i could
have ever dreamt of.

i wish i could
tell everyone
just how happy you
make me
but I know
this is something
they wouldn't understand.
so i take your hand
and you know
without me saying,
that even if
they find out
our secret
you have my heart
and you will always
keep it.

i love you! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 33 [informant] => justme03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

My Beautiful Secret

Contributed by justme03 on Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 11:46:52 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

her body is up
against mine.
i feel the rise and
fall of her chest
& feel the curves
of her breast

i look into her eyes,
feel her arms around me
and i know;
when i am with her
there is no need for
a disguise

we kiss
& i never knew
it could feel like this...
so much beauty,
so much love,
nothing i could
have ever dreamt of.

i wish i could
tell everyone
just how happy you
make me
but I know
this is something
they wouldn't understand.
so i take your hand
and you know
without me saying,
that even if
they find out
our secret
you have my heart
and you will always
keep it.

i love you!

Copyright © justme03 ... [ 2006-08-10 11:46:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Beautiful Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 12:22:15 PM AEST
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What a beautifull secret, indeed.
Very sweet write.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: My Beautiful Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 02:38:05 PM AEST
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Sensual. And ostensibly very emotive. A beautiful tribute. Though, there should be no need to hide your feelings for one, from anyone. In my opinion. Perhaps, the love you two have for eachother will rise above, and you'll be able to confess to the world. I sincerely wish the best for the both of you.

Again - a beautifil poem. Thank you for posting.

-Cassy

Re: My Beautiful Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Channing on Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 05:09:03 PM AEST
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Such a controversial subject, I like it, very good write!

-Channing-

Re: My Beautiful Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 04:29:26 PM AEST
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Brilliant!
Great descriptions and tone.
I've been in that situation...
Good write!

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