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Array ( [sid] => 12434 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Picture of Perfection [time] => 2003-02-11 16:40:00 [hometext] => people's real feelings hidden deep inside, they may seem all composed and happy but deep down - it's another story... [bodytext] => If you see anyone (walking down a street)
You won't be able (to know whats going on)
Minds confused and angered (who is it to blame)
What really goes on
Is locked and hidden away.

Faces covered with emotion
Some may be true
Others painted false
Painted so thick no one realise
That what they see is a deeply disguised man

Chorus:
You won't ever (ever know)
What really goes on
Problems, emotions and pain
Are hidden behind a picture of perfection
Ready to face another day

People smile and act like they're fine
But deep inside it's another story
Deep inside of everyone is a demon
Oh we must try to keep it locked inside
I don't know but sometimes we're evil
Other times we turn out just fine
What is it that makes us who we are
No one ever turns out the same

Bridge:
Fears swimming around inside us
But the face it can tell lies

(chorus x 1)

You won't ever (ever know)
What really goes on
Problems, emotions and pain
Are hidden behind a picture of perfection
A picture of perfection
A picture of perfection
A picture of perfection
Ready to face another day [comments] => 6 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Anna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Picture of Perfection

Contributed by Anna on Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



If you see anyone (walking down a street)
You won't be able (to know whats going on)
Minds confused and angered (who is it to blame)
What really goes on
Is locked and hidden away.

Faces covered with emotion
Some may be true
Others painted false
Painted so thick no one realise
That what they see is a deeply disguised man

Chorus:
You won't ever (ever know)
What really goes on
Problems, emotions and pain
Are hidden behind a picture of perfection
Ready to face another day

People smile and act like they're fine
But deep inside it's another story
Deep inside of everyone is a demon
Oh we must try to keep it locked inside
I don't know but sometimes we're evil
Other times we turn out just fine
What is it that makes us who we are
No one ever turns out the same

Bridge:
Fears swimming around inside us
But the face it can tell lies

(chorus x 1)

You won't ever (ever know)
What really goes on
Problems, emotions and pain
Are hidden behind a picture of perfection
A picture of perfection
A picture of perfection
A picture of perfection
Ready to face another day




Copyright © Anna ... [ 2003-02-11 16:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Picture of Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 08:11:45 PM AEST
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no,,,its the thing that peope want in thei lives,,they search for problems,,answers,,rasons to not be here,,i have a kid in me,,he's a playful kid that kees me going in life,,without tha hassels that everyone has to deal with,,a friend in words,,spooky


Re: Picture of Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 09:09:39 AM AEST
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great write
very strong ...well done

peace be your journey
terry


Re: Picture of Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:32:40 PM AEST
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Really lovely.....
Jenni


Re: Picture of Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Friday, 21st February 2003 @ 05:04:26 PM AEST
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Anna
That's life
It's what you make it
I liked this (had to skip your second I am an emotional coward) more of your spirit showed through in this one
Fear doesn't frighten you to death does it?


Re: Picture of Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 08:58:42 PM AEST
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this is so true... i can see myself within your words .. no one really knows the real you....


Re: Picture of Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:36:54 PM AEST
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Anna I Loved It That's Just Life. People Judge But They Shouldn't




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