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[aid] => mick
[title] => Preliminary
[time] => 2006-08-13 21:14:35
[hometext] => Pretty much everything I have submitted on this site so far has been, in my opinion, horrible teenage poetry. For a long, long time was so afraid to reveal how I truly felt, even in my writing; but I believe I have finally found the confidence enough .
[bodytext] => I fell in love with a perfect stranger, by the way A breeze that should be salty an image not at fault I'm struck I'm stagnant wishing the tasteless breeze would carry me off I'll float on the feather of a bird who doesn't know how good he has it A mind that shakes and shifts too much to be uplifted will be my demise I may seem to reveal to much but in truth there are still so many surprises some may make you hate me others may get me what I need But you'll never know "and I will pretend I don't know of your sins until you're ready to confess but all the time, all the time......" will you pretend to know? or pretend otherwise? my patience would crush us if it were to gain tangibility Lord know it already crushes me Do you find the cosmos terrifying? I do But fear is the heart of love And I fear you're never meant to keep your first "when your eyes slink across me I get that feeling in my stomach of a girl with her new love standing at the pier as he sees his old lover Thery wave to eachother and in that brief instant you know hell never stop missing her touch" I'll never compare I'm merely a child and you're just killing time before it kills me at least I know you don't show because you're afraid of your own heart and not of me But isn't that the same thing? I'm too paranoid for my own good oh so patient It'll soon drive me crazy Ha, as if it hasn't already All I ask is for your honesty no matter how brutal it vould be I'd rather you set me free than lead me on in a deadly dance cause I took a chance with you I thought I would never have the courage to take And i fear the doubts I expressed took the spark out of your kiss I'm sorry Simply sorry But you were the first to break down this wall and all you did was lay on top of me with that cold Aikido grip on my ass with a look in your eyes that said I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm a coward YOU'RE not the one YOU'RE not the one YOU'RE not the one I need... But this feels so damn good [comments] => 4 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 52 [informant] => zeppchic420 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
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