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Array ( [sid] => 124581 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Murder me! [time] => 2006-08-17 08:46:44 [hometext] => another one of my twisted little works [bodytext] => Murder Me!

You spoke such beauty in the words you said
Forever & always those were the words
I thought this would last for eternity
I never knew forever came this quick

Now it is clear I was so blind
Your worthless to me just a waste of my time
So burn & choke on your lies
You were so perfect but now you’re stained

And when the sun rises you start over
Not this time, not tonight
No longer will you commit these sins
I won’t let you

Die! You *****, for what you did
I’ll strangle the beauty from your eyes
Die! You *****, you killed me
Now together in death forever we’ll be
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Immortal-Dragon21 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Murder me!

Contributed by Immortal-Dragon21 on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 08:46:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Murder Me!

You spoke such beauty in the words you said
Forever & always those were the words
I thought this would last for eternity
I never knew forever came this quick

Now it is clear I was so blind
Your worthless to me just a waste of my time
So burn & choke on your lies
You were so perfect but now you’re stained

And when the sun rises you start over
Not this time, not tonight
No longer will you commit these sins
I won’t let you

Die! You *****, for what you did
I’ll strangle the beauty from your eyes
Die! You *****, you killed me
Now together in death forever we’ll be

Copyright Â© Immortal-Dragon21 ... [ 2006-08-17 08:46:44]
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Re: Murder me! (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 09:33:49 AM AEST
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I liked the theme, but I think you could make this even stronger than it already is. I liked the last 2 lines most.

Naomi

Re: Murder me! (User Rating: 1 )
by Metikulus on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 03:43:08 PM AEST
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nice job...beautiful piece of art

Re: Murder me! (User Rating: 1 )
by shinji_kusa on Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 05:06:17 PM AEST
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thats awesome lol, revenge is a personal fave of mine!

-jason

Re: Murder me! (User Rating: 1 )
by Soccerflyer27 on Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 10:11:31 AM AEST
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This is a really powerful poem. It expresses a lot of emotions you feel when you're in this kind of situation: Anger, frustration, and sadness. Great Job!

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