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[aid] => mick
[title] => Mediocre Thought or Musing
[time] => 2006-08-19 20:16:09
[hometext] => on inquiry.. lol
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The sheer monotony of beauty;
just one beautiful day after another
can be rather weary on one's nerves,
even when one is in love.
B
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Mediocre Thought or Musing
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Man_On_High
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Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 08:16:09 PM in AEST
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The sheer monotony of beauty;
just one beautiful day after another
can be rather weary on one's nerves,
even when one is in love.
B
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Re: Mediocre Thought or Musing
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 10:11:49 PM AEST
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.. lol I beg to differ dear poet ..
interesting? .. yes ... fascinating? -perhaps ..
in fact .. there are a HOARD of adjectives
I could suggest for this- none of which are
synonymous with mediocre
You, good sir, are a master at your craft. Deal with it. :P
XO
~Breezy
(who believes when one is in love, commonplace
seems exquisitely beautiful .. even if it becomes weary) |
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Re: Mediocre Thought or Musing
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 03:27:34 AM AEST
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lol interesting piece Billy
i agree with what Breezy said.
good job
hugs |
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Re: Mediocre Thought or Musing
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by wizard on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 09:24:04 PM AEST
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much truth in this...for love can alter the way in which we see ALL things...perhaps that's why i've chosen to have it elude me for so long...lol
nic piece, bro
wizard
(cabinet going in-er...lol) |
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Re: Mediocre Thought or Musing
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 09:34:43 PM AEST
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Ah, Billy - you're such a delight! And rest assured, I shall never use that "m" word in your comment section!
~Snemmy
(who paused to ponder whether "especially" might be an interesting replacement for "even" in that last line, on occasion) |
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Re: Mediocre Thought or Musing
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 11:06:26 PM AEST
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I agree. More proof that everything is good only in moderation. Thankyou for the honesty-it was like ice tea, he he.
larkspur. |
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Re: Mediocre Thought or Musing
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by Leslie on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 06:42:18 PM AEST
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| Although this poem is thoughtfully written, my feelings on the content are somewhat different from others. Having been through some very tough times in my life, I relish in the thought of endless beautiful days and am grateful for any love, kindness, goodness, beauty that comes my way for however long it stays. If you are only writing about the weather then.......my comments are mistaken. |
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Re: Mediocre Thought or Musing
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by Spike on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 11:40:18 PM AEST
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True enough, till they're gone. Nice observation.
S |
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Re: Mediocre Thought or Musing
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 11:56:18 PM AEST
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Short and to the point. It's amazing that
when one is in love they seem to see things differently. I'm gonna second Wiz's comment~
*Shine on superstar*
love always,
sue m |
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