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Array ( [sid] => 12478 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => MY LOSS [time] => 2003-02-12 09:00:00 [hometext] => A wonderful girl I loved, who decided to cheat on me.(I write too many of these) [bodytext] => There are many poems that write about love,
Love lost, love gained and all of the above,
Mine is simple it was you,
I say this with a frown on my face,
Because love has a secret side too,
I thought we were forever,
But all your pictures are gone,
The gifts you gave me I left in my lawn,
I remember the day I met you the best,
Then I think of the day I left you,
Your lies ripped my heart from my chest,
It’s foolish to love a girl so much,
Now every little thing reminds me of us,
I wish I could bare to look at your face,
It’s even harder now that we live in the same ***** place,
Two years have passed now but I still love you the most,
I’ve seen other girls and I have even had sex,
I tried lots of things to forget you,
But I can’t trick my heart,
It beats for you,
You still control a big part,
It’s yours forever,
And that’s how long it will wait,
So I sit here now with our memories in mind,
Wishing that you weren’t so damned blind,
Didn’t you see what we had,
God I miss you so bad,
Should I talk to you again,
I wish I could,
How have you been,
Just a hello would do,
Anything to hear from you,
I could write a million of these poems,
And I will do all it takes,
So that one day you’ll read one and realize your mistake.
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MY LOSS

Contributed by Paul on Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



There are many poems that write about love,
Love lost, love gained and all of the above,
Mine is simple it was you,
I say this with a frown on my face,
Because love has a secret side too,
I thought we were forever,
But all your pictures are gone,
The gifts you gave me I left in my lawn,
I remember the day I met you the best,
Then I think of the day I left you,
Your lies ripped my heart from my chest,
It’s foolish to love a girl so much,
Now every little thing reminds me of us,
I wish I could bare to look at your face,
It’s even harder now that we live in the same ***** place,
Two years have passed now but I still love you the most,
I’ve seen other girls and I have even had sex,
I tried lots of things to forget you,
But I can’t trick my heart,
It beats for you,
You still control a big part,
It’s yours forever,
And that’s how long it will wait,
So I sit here now with our memories in mind,
Wishing that you weren’t so damned blind,
Didn’t you see what we had,
God I miss you so bad,
Should I talk to you again,
I wish I could,
How have you been,
Just a hello would do,
Anything to hear from you,
I could write a million of these poems,
And I will do all it takes,
So that one day you’ll read one and realize your mistake.




Copyright © Paul ... [ 2003-02-12 09:00:00]
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Re: MY LOSS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 09:09:32 AM AEST
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Wow, I guess I like this poem because I feel the same about someone who can't see the light either. Great Poem. Keep writing them like me and maybe we will either get through or get over. Thx.


Re: MY LOSS (User Rating: 1 )
by blain on Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 09:35:57 AM AEST
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same here... same here..... like almost ALL my poems are about lost love.... love hurts huh.. esp w vdae around the corner. ah well. just rmb vdae's just a commercialised day


Re: MY LOSS (User Rating: 1 )
by Merkaba on Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 07:18:24 PM AEST
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yep, love officially sucks...


Re: MY LOSS (User Rating: 1 )
by renee on Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 10:17:27 AM AEST
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you will find the right person one day dont give up on love just yet there is someone out there for you
you have to take it one day at a time and love does not suck its beautiful with the right person you will see
renee




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