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Array ( [sid] => 124948 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Seduced by a drug [time] => 2006-08-27 01:02:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I am trying so hard to resist
Even though you persist
On making me obey your every command
Oh why don't you understand
That as tempting as you are
I have come so very far
So please don't do this to me
Why can't you just let me be

"You can't tell me that you don't miss
My tender loving kiss
And how I can make you smile
I promise you that I'll
Make you feel real good
The way that no other could
I can put your mind at ease
I will satisfy not tease."

I will admit that the one thing I admire
Is how your touch I does take me higher
But this just isn't right
I think we should say goodnight

Then he puts his hand on my face
My heart begins to race
And he says," remember how good it used to be
When it was just you and me."

I tried to say no, but couldn't speak
I tried to walk away, but my legs were weak
In the corner he's got me pinned
Then I take a deep breathe and take him in
As I am rocking him nice slow
I feel ecstasy from head to toe
But then the feeling begins to fade
As I realize the mistake I just made
Only my senses had arrived to late
For I had already made love to the one that I hate

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Seduced by a drug

Contributed by babylugz on Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 01:02:25 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

I am trying so hard to resist
Even though you persist
On making me obey your every command
Oh why don't you understand
That as tempting as you are
I have come so very far
So please don't do this to me
Why can't you just let me be

"You can't tell me that you don't miss
My tender loving kiss
And how I can make you smile
I promise you that I'll
Make you feel real good
The way that no other could
I can put your mind at ease
I will satisfy not tease."

I will admit that the one thing I admire
Is how your touch I does take me higher
But this just isn't right
I think we should say goodnight

Then he puts his hand on my face
My heart begins to race
And he says," remember how good it used to be
When it was just you and me."

I tried to say no, but couldn't speak
I tried to walk away, but my legs were weak
In the corner he's got me pinned
Then I take a deep breathe and take him in
As I am rocking him nice slow
I feel ecstasy from head to toe
But then the feeling begins to fade
As I realize the mistake I just made
Only my senses had arrived to late
For I had already made love to the one that I hate

Copyright © babylugz ... [ 2006-08-27 01:02:25]
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Re: Seduced by a drug (User Rating: 1 )
by brneyes7513 on Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 06:18:18 PM AEST
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No comments???

That was amazing....but some people just wouldn't understand.

Nicely written

Re: Seduced by a drug (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 10:56:24 PM AEST
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A thin thread of a line between love and hate and there are those who can walk that tightrope expertly and even brutally break it. Be an "expert" at strengthening that line to where it can't be broken. And then get on the right side and stay there. If he walks it, twang it real hard like a bow string - see which way he falls!!!! Good write.

Re: Seduced by a drug (User Rating: 1 )
by laydeeluck on Thursday, 28th December 2006 @ 06:02:27 PM AEST
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it really is a rollarcaster you go up and peak a rush overtakes you.....then as fast as you go up you crash down and the rides over.........the line up is too big to get back on....but we dont care we would stand there for hours for 5 seconds of that rush.....well written and most understood

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