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Array ( [sid] => 125009 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Night Scene With Dinner [time] => 2006-08-28 09:56:09 [hometext] => Night Scene With Dinner by Jock Phillips. Life and stars and sometimes cooking or eating. [bodytext] => And it's happening all around you
The colors and the light
And the life and the doing good
Just had to write and say look up and see it there
It's all in the air sky and sunset sunrise
Moon glow and stars with light and galaxies
Down here a person in a kitchen room building lot
With amounts of food all cooking up all over the place
Cooking and will eat the food when ready and maybe with some other people
Others walk around the streets and some inside other places
Eating walking cooking or doing something else and maybe sitting
Life and stars and sometimes cooking or eating [comments] => 2 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 21 [informant] => JockPhillips [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Night Scene With Dinner

Contributed by JockPhillips on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 09:56:09 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

And it's happening all around you
The colors and the light
And the life and the doing good
Just had to write and say look up and see it there
It's all in the air sky and sunset sunrise
Moon glow and stars with light and galaxies
Down here a person in a kitchen room building lot
With amounts of food all cooking up all over the place
Cooking and will eat the food when ready and maybe with some other people
Others walk around the streets and some inside other places
Eating walking cooking or doing something else and maybe sitting
Life and stars and sometimes cooking or eating

Copyright © JockPhillips ... [ 2006-08-28 09:56:09]
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Re: Night Scene With Dinner (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 10:27:01 AM AEST
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Jock, Again I find so much simplicity. I'm beginning to find your form quite interesting.
I had some great visuals on this one, especially in the beginning, where you were once again challenging my mind's eye.
Peace, Laura

Re: Night Scene With Dinner (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 06:34:48 PM AEST
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Art! Have to keep checking it Jock. Art and other colours...

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