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Array ( [sid] => 12521 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => the bald eagel [time] => 2003-02-13 01:00:00 [hometext] => this is a poem of a girl with cancer the tittle kinda missleads things but it is a real good poem one of my favorites [bodytext] => why do you take advantage of my time
i was getting along just fine
you decide to come along
singing your fake song
why do you beat the person inside of me
why don't you set her free
i have had a short life
you stab me with vulgar words like a knife
i am the same as all of you
if that's so why do i fell so blue
i have a heart and fellings to
big deal i'm bald and have lukemia
i miss being able to run, jump, and play
i can't wait for the golden day
i know how it fells to hold onto the one you love
so untill the day i go to heven
be nice to me i'm only seven
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the bald eagel

Contributed by chantel on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

why do you take advantage of my time
i was getting along just fine
you decide to come along
singing your fake song
why do you beat the person inside of me
why don't you set her free
i have had a short life
you stab me with vulgar words like a knife
i am the same as all of you
if that's so why do i fell so blue
i have a heart and fellings to
big deal i'm bald and have lukemia
i miss being able to run, jump, and play
i can't wait for the golden day
i know how it fells to hold onto the one you love
so untill the day i go to heven
be nice to me i'm only seven

Copyright © chantel ... [ 2003-02-13 01:00:00]
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Re: the bald eagel (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:31:42 AM AEST
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oh, my heart goes out for this girl...so sad, thank you for sharing

Re: the bald eagel (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 03:25:25 AM AEST
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Very very heart touching poem ...venkat

Re: the bald eagel (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 07:35:42 AM AEST
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awwww..... so touching......

Re: the bald eagel (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 11:03:09 AM AEST
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OMG this was so touching,Only 7 how sad,
She can have my hair! Bless her! Christina

Re: the bald eagel (User Rating: 1 )
by chantel on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 03:51:47 PM AEST
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yall just to let yall know i wrote this poem about my cousin's cousin she died a month after i wrote it. she is know in heven with the lord and i apreciate her greatly she tought me that even young people go through this stuff

Re: the bald eagel (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 10:22:10 PM AEST
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Chantel thank you for sharing. You were right about my last poem it is him and my family. I cried today, I'll tell you why later. Love you always and forever
Amy

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