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Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 01:18:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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One day when my life made no sense I went through a life changing experience
It was when I first saw her face My great big heart began to race
Its hard to, in words say Why she changed me this way
What was and use to be, is no more As it were, my future came through the door
I was certainly not the man I am now Why was this so different and how
She came into my world as my angel So innocent, lovely and oh so fragile
She was the best thing to happen to me And I cant let her go as you can plainly see
She is my very dream come true That helps me tell this story to you
She is my fluttering butterfly So beautiful and the reason why
I cant go back to the motley days of my youth She keeps me older each day to tell the truth
When the time comes to let her go Can I do it? I dont think Ill know
Till the day comes when I should That I eat my pride and hide my mood
Ill see what my decision brings And let her flap her wings
And leave me in sorrow to cry And worry no matter how hard I try
Not to think or trouble my mind... I know she will think of me in kind
My dreams for her will soon definitely alter If you havent figured it out shes my daughter
And Ill miss her
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oneir8dude
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2006-09-03 01:18:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Changes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Skillz on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 02:30:20 AM AEST (User
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So hard to watch they grow up and become their own...very well expressed and ty for sharing it. H&K |
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Re: Changes
(User Rating: 1 ) by jerseysue on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 10:01:01 AM AEST (User
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I have one of those too. My daughter is my life , more so since my husband, her dad passed away. It is going to be so hard when she goes to University in England next year. I don't know wether I will cope. The poem is realistic and so true of us all. Loved it. Sue x |
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Re: Changes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lionel on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 07:50:47 PM AEST (User
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Excellent poem.... And, I know just what you mean. I have a wonderful daughter too. |
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