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Contributed by oneir8dude on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 01:18:31 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems





One day when my life made no sense
I went through a life changing experience

It was when I first saw her face
My great big heart began to race

Its hard to, in words say
Why she changed me this way

What was and use to be, is no more
As it were, my future came through the door

I was certainly not the man I am now
Why was this so different and how

She came into my world as my angel
So innocent, lovely and oh so fragile

She was the best thing to happen to me
And I cant let her go as you can plainly see

She is my very dream come true
That helps me tell this story to you

She is my fluttering butterfly
So beautiful and the reason why

I cant go back to the motley days of my youth
She keeps me older each day to tell the truth

When the time comes to let her go
Can I do it? I dont think Ill know

Till the day comes when I should
That I eat my pride and hide my mood

Ill see what my decision brings
And let her flap her wings

And leave me in sorrow to cry
And worry no matter how hard I try

Not to think or trouble my mind...
I know she will think of me in kind

My dreams for her will soon definitely alter
If you havent figured it out shes my daughter

And Ill miss her




Copyright © oneir8dude ... [ 2006-09-03 01:18:31]
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Re: Changes (User Rating: 1 )
by Skillz on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 02:30:20 AM AEST
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So hard to watch they grow up and become their own...very well expressed and ty for sharing it. H&K


Re: Changes (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 10:01:01 AM AEST
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I have one of those too. My daughter is my life , more so since my husband, her dad passed away. It is going to be so hard when she goes to University in England next year. I don't know wether I will cope. The poem is realistic and so true of us all. Loved it. Sue x


Re: Changes (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 07:50:47 PM AEST
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Excellent poem.... And, I know just what you mean. I have a wonderful daughter too.




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