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Array ( [sid] => 125267 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Where is God 2 [time] => 2006-09-03 16:14:53 [hometext] => Here is the second to the first so I hope I get the response I got on the first with the second! It isn't as good but oh well!! [bodytext] => Where is God 2??

When the plege is changed,
And life rearanged,
When church is a thing of the past,
And religion only harassed,
When children are never born,
And abortion abused,
When murder is not illegal,
And thousands dead,
When a simple poem is misread,
And people scolded for there words,
When the four fathers forgotten,
And slavery comes back,
When rape is considered mutual,
And women just abused,
When all the prisons closed,
And convics run free,
When liquor is for kids,
And all are drunks,
When drugs become legal,
And being high is cool,
When having a child at 14 is fun,
And sex is just like a drug,
When life is changed for the worst,
I will still be writing,
I will still beleive,
I will still be trusting,
I will still be strong,
God will still be here,
God will still be angry,
God will still love us,
God will still want the best,
But the devil will have taken over! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 21 [informant] => DesiWalz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Where is God 2

Contributed by DesiWalz on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 04:14:53 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Where is God 2??

When the plege is changed,
And life rearanged,
When church is a thing of the past,
And religion only harassed,
When children are never born,
And abortion abused,
When murder is not illegal,
And thousands dead,
When a simple poem is misread,
And people scolded for there words,
When the four fathers forgotten,
And slavery comes back,
When rape is considered mutual,
And women just abused,
When all the prisons closed,
And convics run free,
When liquor is for kids,
And all are drunks,
When drugs become legal,
And being high is cool,
When having a child at 14 is fun,
And sex is just like a drug,
When life is changed for the worst,
I will still be writing,
I will still beleive,
I will still be trusting,
I will still be strong,
God will still be here,
God will still be angry,
God will still love us,
God will still want the best,
But the devil will have taken over!

Copyright © DesiWalz ... [ 2006-09-03 16:14:53]
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Re: Where is God 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 07:36:41 PM AEST
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Interesting, and provocative. To answer your question: God will still be on the throne. Still having all power in Heaven and earth. The devil is his devil. He (the devil) couldn't touch Job without God's permission. Check it out: - Go to the book of Job in your Bible.
Another thing - Man, without Satan's help, has the potential, in his fallen nature, to be just as bad as you discribe.

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