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Basting in the rain taking the pain
I know no feeling of this torture
Day by day I consume
This agony with no fear

Running away from these troubles
It’s no use since it’s my shadow
When night falls it keeps with me

The troubles I’ve seen
Conspire together
And try to overwhelm me

No way out I take the pain
No matter how much
Try as to overcome me
I’m not one to fall

My feet are as the northern star
Rooted I stand unshaken through
The wind that passes by

My mind and body
Together withstand all
But one has leaked from within
It bleeds through

And to this I have fallen
I have been felled by it
And hope never to again
My heart
My love
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Pain

Contributed by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Pain

Basting in the rain taking the pain
I know no feeling of this torture
Day by day I consume
This agony with no fear

Running away from these troubles
It’s no use since it’s my shadow
When night falls it keeps with me

The troubles I’ve seen
Conspire together
And try to overwhelm me

No way out I take the pain
No matter how much
Try as to overcome me
I’m not one to fall

My feet are as the northern star
Rooted I stand unshaken through
The wind that passes by

My mind and body
Together withstand all
But one has leaked from within
It bleeds through

And to this I have fallen
I have been felled by it
And hope never to again
My heart
My love

Copyright Â© Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow ... [ 2003-02-13 07:00:00]
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Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 08:31:14 PM AEST
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Wow this was so good u describe your feelings so eloquently. No morbidness in this corner... keep on writing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 08:01:12 PM AEST
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Sublime poetry ... I love the way you describe your pain as your shadow ... that is so true - something you can't shake off when your heart has been broken. ..... Jan

Re: Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 03:29:57 PM AEST
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beautiful...

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