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Array ( [sid] => 125391 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Spinning In Love [time] => 2006-09-06 15:24:24 [hometext] => My first poem submitted....Hopefully I can get the rest of my poems on here! ^_^ Enjoy! [bodytext] => As soon as your lips touch mine
The world starts spinning
I feel like I am winning
Something I don’t deserve

My heart screams out
“This can’t be true”
But here I am, snuggled with you
So I shut the screaming out

The only thing I want most
Is to be able to hold your hand
It’s even hard for me to understand
How I love one person like this

But I look up into your eyes
And see all the promises and love
More than I could dream of
And I suddenly know

You are the one I dream of
The one I wake up thinking about
The only one I can’t live without
My only wish is to see you more

I act all happy and so carefree
But really inside I hurt so much
When you give even the softest touch
It seems to make it all go so far away

I don’t care if the spinning never stops
As long as I can be with you
To have someone to look up to
To hold your hand and snuggle in your arms
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Spinning In Love

Contributed by WolfWriter on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 03:24:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

As soon as your lips touch mine
The world starts spinning
I feel like I am winning
Something I don’t deserve

My heart screams out
“This can’t be true”
But here I am, snuggled with you
So I shut the screaming out

The only thing I want most
Is to be able to hold your hand
It’s even hard for me to understand
How I love one person like this

But I look up into your eyes
And see all the promises and love
More than I could dream of
And I suddenly know

You are the one I dream of
The one I wake up thinking about
The only one I can’t live without
My only wish is to see you more

I act all happy and so carefree
But really inside I hurt so much
When you give even the softest touch
It seems to make it all go so far away

I don’t care if the spinning never stops
As long as I can be with you
To have someone to look up to
To hold your hand and snuggle in your arms

Copyright Â© WolfWriter ... [ 2006-09-06 15:24:24]
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Re: Spinning In Love (User Rating: 1 )
by twbanter on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 04:16:17 PM AEST
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Boy I remember feeling like that.... a long long time ago. What a chick flick!! Lol
Sweet...

Tom W

Re: Spinning In Love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 12:16:13 AM AEST
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Very beautifull but I'm getting dizzy.
good work and welcome wolf.
huggs,
emy

Re: Spinning In Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Aaron8124 on Thursday, 29th January 2009 @ 12:22:04 PM AEST
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I really liked it:) made me feel all happy inside hehe

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